First 250 Words Smash! #52 Most Wonderful Author: BreeMost Evil Critique Master: AnnieWorking Title:

First 250 Words Smash! #52

Most Wonderful Author:Bree
Most Evil Critique Master: Annie
Working Title: Grim Magician

On the sixth of September, Aunt Joysa died. Calette didn’t much care until a few weeks later, when her father spoke the name of the deceased in the middle of supper. He went on cutting his asparagus as though he thought he would get away with it, but her mother stilled in an instant and said, “Dalbern, I will speak with you later this evening.”

“Of course,” her father said, reaching for his wine with trembling hands. The children snuck glances at one another, except for Calette, who knew better.

The house was quiet by ten that night. Calette trailed her fingers over cold doorknobs as she moved down the hallway: six rooms for six children, all frozen silent.  Now down the dark staircase, bare feet crushing the carpet, careful to avoid the creaky spots. If she met anyone, she was only going to the kitchen for some water. The sconces in the hallway flickered: someone was still up. She pressed her ear to the study door and held her breath.

Lots of tips on how to elevate your dialogueandbring it to life with this new intro on the bloggity blog! Also kudos, because both Annie and I would definitelyread on with this one.

Spring flu season is still abound, and unfortunately, I became a victim of it. But! After a week of rehabilitation, I can almost taste my food again. I sort of miss…flavors. And sunlight. And not breathing through my mouth.

Anyway! Back to work! Hope everyone’s summers have been magical so far.

(And if you have no idea what this word smash thingy is, read this.)