Don’t fall in love with your fuck buddy. Simple, right?
⤑word count:1k ⤑genre:smut,fwb,sex with feelings ⤑pairing: namjoon x reader ⤑warnings: smut [oral sex (f.receiving), unprotected intercourse, creampie] ⤑ rating: 18+ ⤑read on AO3‖masterlist ⤑a/n: this was written for the lovely possum @sahmfanficbts for the #possumversary!i hope you like it ♡
To read sexy COHERENT banter in a smut scene is lovely. To WRITE it is something else.
“I forget how good you feel”
“You’ll have to have me more often then,” you add with a smirk and prop yourself up on your elbows. “Get used to me.”
Sigh. What a lovely couple. KNJ is having his nirvana moment and OC comes in strong with a cheeky, teasing remark.
And then he snaps because she’s inviting him to more — more frequency, more familiarity, less fwb, less distance. Ye it’s an invitation framed in such an easy breezy way that doesn’t make him run away but makes him snap his resolve and just go for it?
“You’re so good at this, Joonie,” you pant, walls fluttering around him. He moves his hand away from your crotch and tugs at your nipple gently, relishing the way you tighten around him. God, he wants to paint your tits with cum. “Give it to me so good every time…” “Yeah? You take it so well,” he teases, imitating you once more because he enjoys the way you laugh at his antics. “You deserve it. So good and pretty for me. Want to touch and kiss all over.”
Just wow. There’s OC speech. OCs physical reactions. There’s KNJ POV. Theres KNJ speech. And after this little exchange, Dee just had to put in a “Shit right there moment!” which thrills me to no end because nothing feels better when you find the right position, the right placement, the right ahem, person.
“You start moaning so loudly he becomes dizzy from the surge of blood to his cock. Namjoon gets on top of you, damaged knees on the mattress, grabbing and lifting your ass so he can fuck into you. His mouth suckles on your neck, moaning into it, your pussy bringing him closer to his orgasm.”
You know what? This smut hits so good because of the action and reaction sequences Dee writes. We see how their bodies react step by step to each movement and how it propels them to the um finish line. *note to self— when writing smut, remember action, reaction, erection!!!!!!!
“Just like that, give it to me, Joon,” you encourage him, letting out groans with every thrust. Namjoon can’t take it any longer, his balls crying for release as your nails dig into his back and heels press into his ass. “Pretty, I'm—fuck—coming!”
I know ahem @hobi-gif always gonna call me out on things like nipples begging to be touched but O M G — I love a body part that suddenly has feelings like balls crying for release.
Fucking hell, this entire paragraph is just packing with sexy verbs and sexy sounds, and the main ingredient in a sexy ass smut scene— desperation.
Dee, you really must go to the folks at masterclass and do a workshop on how to write conversation and action in a smut scene because it all flows so seamlessly that I’m fucking envious how it reads!!!!
Don’t fall in love with your fuck buddy. Simple, right?
⤑word count:1k ⤑genre:smut,fwb,sex with feelings ⤑pairing: namjoon x reader ⤑warnings: smut [oral sex (f.receiving), unprotected intercourse, creampie] ⤑ rating: 18+ ⤑read on AO3‖masterlist ⤑a/n: this was written for the lovely possum @sahmfanficbts for the #possumversary!i hope you like it ♡
Dee, I, uhhhh, holy shit. This is also spot on perfect for our beloved @sahmfanficbts and nearly lit my phone on fire. So thank you.
@reliablemittenmain thou art correct. It’s perfect!!!!!! I’m in looooove with this fic and I hope I get to find out what happens to this cute couple nnnnnnnnn
