#constructive critism welcome
Do I have any Marvel fans following me? Or even ts fans who like Marvel???
Asking for a very important reason.
ALRIGHT THIS HAS 5 NOTES BUT FOR MY VALIDATION DEPRIVED MIND ITS MORE THAN ENOUGH
CURSED IDEA
Roman-Thor
Patton-Steve
Virgil-Bruce
Logan-Tony
Janus-natasha
Remus-Clint
Thank you for your time
heres an blurb from my brain, tell me what you think and give me some tips and criticisms! havent written in a while :)
“When I turned, my lungs collapsed and forced the air into the world by a splitting scream. Azalea had her hair within a mans relentless clutch, his dagger, copper from years of use, was plunged deep into her skull. The dagger had caught sight of the tender spot right behind her earlobe and made its home within her head. Her jaw had been wedged open, the dagger holding her mouth from closing — so she held the same fearful surprise as the airless gasp she had released barely a second before her life was stolen.”