#i will never not be soft for that sort of thing
one cool part about reviewing your outline to address notes/solve problems is that you notice cool things you did that you didn’t realize you were doing
for example, I have two pre-commission beats where Eli and Ambrose are unconsciously attracted to each other. They’re still rivals, but they’re making positive observations about each other. It’s subtle, and something I’m going to lean into in draft 3 to help address a note.
But these specific beats are both where Eli and Ambrose are seeing each other in their element. Ambrose is watching Eli as he navigates a networking night, Eli is watching Ambrose brew a potion.
I don’t know, something about that makes me happy.
