The Boy[M] Pairing:Kim Sunwoo x Fem!Reader Tags: 22k words, Strangers to lovers, Fluff, Romance, Humor, Smut. Summary:There is so much more to the cute boy at the car wash and he’s hell bent on changing your mind about him.
Warnings:Mature/Adult themes throughout + Sexually Explicit Content at the end of the story. Language, light alcohol use, age gap (reader is 5yrs older), slow burn but not?, a ton of kissing/making out, unprotected sex (m/f), fingering (f), oral (f), mentions of loser exes & cheating, overall its a lot of flirting and fluff, and the story of two people unexpectedly falling in love.
You know how after a long day of work, every single minuscule thing has the power to send you over the edge?
The current culprit for your impending meltdown is this stupid, never-ending red light.
You swear it’s been a solid five minutes without change and you’re ready to gather random materials from the passenger seat to create a makeshift slingshot and fire loose change at the damn thing until it turns green. Just before you let loose another expletive, the light changes and you press down on the gas with a long sigh.
Things are going to get better. Soon enough you’ll be in your own home, stripped of your heels and business attire, earrings tossed onto your dresser carelessly as you trade it all out for an over-sized sweatshirt and pair of fuzzy socks. You’ll turn on some trashy reality show and dig into the take out sitting next to you. The thought brings a smile to your lips and then the phone rings.
What a fantastic read. It was so much fun and 22k words flew by so quickly. I love how you wrote Sunwoo. I feel you got his witty, quirky characteristics so well. I adored it. Your dialogue is something I envy. Each character had their own personality and it shone in your story. That’s talent!!! The flow and progression were nice as well. I liked how you repeated the reader going to the car wash, but each interaction was a little different than the first. Slowly, there was more of it. The build-up was perfect. It didn’t feel rushed. The age gap was nice, too. I really like your writing. Thank you for your hard work ☺️ I apologize if this is all over the place!
Here’s a snippet of my thoughts while reading:
He holds out your keys but just before you can take them he lifts them a bit higher. “I haven’t seen your beautiful smile yet,” He narrows his eyes, “How can I be sure it’s really you?”
I’M CRYING that was smooth. I’m a sucker for dialogue like this haha. I giggled irl
You tried to keep your eyes focused on your phone but curiosity not only killed the cat but also your sense of dignity as you strained to overhear the conversation, peering at them in your peripherals.
Awh I love the twist of the common “curiosity killed the cat” phrase. It really captured my attention.
“She likes to hold things in until she becomes an emotional little teapot ready to blow.”
What a great visual, and also very relatable!
“More importantly, who is that? He’s hot!” “Thank you,” Sunwoo murmurs, eyes still closed with his head propped against the back of the couch.
I screamed! It’s the fact he didn’t bother to open his eyes when he said that. Adlkgjklkfsj. I feel that shouldn’t have affected me so much but it did… Thank you lol!
