#5 years later
Since she stopped drinking, Bunty’s perceptions of the world have undergone a multitude of shifts. Some of those shifts have been small and gradual, like the realisation that mornings are actually not that vile after all, and that breakfast can be an enjoyable meal and not just a cup of coffee and a handful of headache tablets. Some shifts have been seismic revelations, such as when she was attending a birthday lunch for Camilla Allingham at the Country Club, and she overheard Lilith Drummond-Stuart telling Susan Abbott that she bought a rare white labradoodle recently because it complemented her white leather couch. In that moment Bunty knew with terrible sober clarity that the majority of her friends are nothing but a bunch of vapid, selfish bitches with a terrible sense of style- I mean, for heaven’s sake, Bunty fumed to Ian that night over dinner: Everybody knows that the white interiors trend was over two years ago!
Bunty has also been trying to seek out more meaningful and life-affirming activities with which to fill her days- she has always enjoyed chess and has joined a chess club, which meets every Wednesday evening at the local high school. The ages of those attending ranges from seven to eighty-seven and represent an intriguing cross-section of the local population: on some nights Bunty might see the mayor’s wife playing against a school janitor, or a pig farmer competing with a prom queen. Ian can sometimes be persuaded to join her too, if he isn’t too tired after working all day at the ranch.
She is also playing tennis regularly again, and volunteers several days a week at a non-profit called Wardrobe Wranglers. Wardrobe Wranglers was founded to help ex-felons and the long-term unemployed find the right clothes to wear to job interviews, but in response to an obvious need has now expanded its stylist services to all sartorially-challenged members of the community. Bunty is passionate about her work for this worthy organisation, but she does have an agenda- to rid the district of every last pair of UGG boots. This is her mission in life, her calling! And she will be victorious!
mostly posting this here for my own edification, but also to show how much can change over time. Abilities, interests, et cetera. Anyway, this is just to see how much a person can improve in five years with consistent practice and stuff. idk.
I tried to fix some of the more obvious mistakes while respecting my old style as much as I could. Honestly, there are things about the 2021 version I would still change, but I got bored with this exercise half-way through ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ bone-app the teeth.
I blurred the text because it was distracting out-of-context.
Yes I used to have a webcomic please don’t ask me about it
notes below the cut in case you want a more-detailed summary of what I changed.
- the biggest change is the lineart. Went from hard digital pen to a softer pencil.
- made shading softer/more natural
- fixed some anatomy problems (noses too long; eyes uneven; hands missing bones/muscles/shape; mouths too big; chin not well-defined or balanced)
- zoomed perspective out on all 3 characters
- aged-up appearance appropriately(looked too young for their ages whoops)
- added more details like freckles + scars
- TO MY CREDIT, I only drew noses like that for about a week in my life, and wouldn’t you know it? That week was in February of 2016. I was trying something and it didn’t work. It’s not a bad method but I didn’t execute it well
other notes:
>>>I do not necessarily think the first version is bad; it has some good parts to it. But there are also some basic errors from lack of experience. I had only been regularly drawing for about a year when I made this, so with that in mind it’s not bad. The expressions convey the intended emotions decently I think, the anatomy just needed a little bit of tweaking. If you’re an artist, I recommend going back to an old piece and trying again. Or, if that’s too much trouble, try looking at old pieces and identifying what you might change/do differently.