#am i doing this right feedback appreciated

what in the name of bisexual awakening is going on here on this day

[ID. An illustration and a detail close up of two characters: a woman with unnaturally pale skin and a form-fitting Victorian ballgown crouches over Jonathan Harker, a young man with light brown skin and dark brown hair, as he reclines on a fainting couch. He has a noticeable shaving scar on his left cheek and stubble on his chin. He wears a white collared shirt with braces and a black necktie hangs loose around his neck. The woman bares her fangs above Jonathan’s exposed neck and her blonde hair flows back behind her. Jonathan looks out under his eyelashes with a look of both distress and longing. End ID.]