#how to write dialogue
Using said after the dialogue isn’t great and neither is just plugging in -ed or -ly words. Try adding more to help your reader better understand how the charter feels. Don’t be afraid to make it creative, make a comparison, or make it metaphorical.
“I can’t” she said.
“I can’t” she said shyly.
“I can’t” she whispered only to herself, but she didn’t realize the dust in the empty chair could hear too.
