#new version

Beta-reading release for the first 5 chapters of “The Sario Effect”. Image’s not final. Summary and Link attached in this post.

Summary:It was supposed to be a normal Saturday afternoon. We deserved a break after everything we’ve been through. Then out of the blue, a kid bumped into us with a strange device. A Yeerk device. And the Yeerks want it back from her.

We don’t know what’s going on. What that device is. Or how this Controller is connected to everything. The only thing Rachel, Tobias, Cassie, Ax, Marco and I do know is that she might have the answers we need.

And she might actually be more dangerous than Visser Three himself…

Since my note regarding my fanfiction writing, I’ve re-evaluated what I wanted for my story idea: a disabled Host with a Yeerk, and reedited the entire story of the Sario Effect thanks to several peoples’ help. I do wanna give a small apology that “here we go again! Another version of this one fic I’ve made” and honestly, I feel the same as you do. This is like the fifth version and I’ve been pulling my hair wondering why on Earth did I not just make this version from the beginning. 

So considering this has gone through versions, by all means, wreck this piece with all the constructive criticism to the ground. I want your harshest, honest feedback to make up for it. In order words, break my legs.

Link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/11VfIy0jDgr9gReqThWHQWk4Lw5Wvb8Peoyj9LPfqmkw/edit?usp=sharing

Viewers have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic. Unless I didn’t again, please inform me if that’s the case.
This post will get updates in the comments from me for the next releases. Chp 6 to 10 are still in progress/refining. Once I finish my covers for this fic and editing is finished, I’ll upload this version to FFN and AO3.