Newest and final revamp/revival of the Sario Effect.
Can I say I am asking myself “why do this to yourself with this accursed plot concept in 2020”. But yeah, here’s me attempting once again because I’m stubborn! AO3 Link for the first three finished chapters. I will update here for every major update down the line.
Enjoy the images and the beginning.
Declaration here as I made over on the Animorphs discord: I’m eating my own hat if this “REVAMPED” plot gives me another writer’s block and I go on haitus again.
Beta-reading release for the first 5 chapters of “The Sario Effect”. Image’s not final. Summary and Link attached in this post.
Summary:It was supposed to be a normal Saturday afternoon. We deserved a break after everything we’ve been through. Then out of the blue, a kid bumped into us with a strange device. A Yeerk device. And the Yeerks want it back from her.
We don’t know what’s going on. What that device is. Or how this Controller is connected to everything. The only thing Rachel, Tobias, Cassie, Ax, Marco and I do know is that she might have the answers we need.
And she might actually be more dangerous than Visser Three himself…
Since my note regarding my fanfiction writing, I’ve re-evaluated what I wanted for my story idea: a disabled Host with a Yeerk, and reedited the entire story of the Sario Effect thanks to several peoples’ help. I do wanna give a small apology that “here we go again! Another version of this one fic I’ve made” and honestly, I feel the same as you do. This is like the fifth version and I’ve been pulling my hair wondering why on Earth did I not just make this version from the beginning.
So considering this has gone through versions, by all means, wreck this piece with all the constructive criticism to the ground. I want your harshest, honest feedback to make up for it. In order words, break my legs.
Viewers have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic. Unless I didn’t again, please inform me if that’s the case. This post will get updates in the comments from me for the next releases. Chp 6 to 10 are still in progress/refining. Once I finish my covers for this fic and editing is finished, I’ll upload this version to FFN and AO3.
Hello all, next 5 chapters have been added for beta-reading, making 10 chps in total. As mentioned above, you have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic. Please give as much feedback as possible and I hope you will enjoy it.
Hellow all, next 5 chapters have been added for beta-reading, making 15 chps in total. As mentioned above, you have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic.
Also I’ll be opening a poll soon as I’ve noticed I’ve not gotten any feedback since the last chps. I wanna know that if so far that the progress is alright that it doesn’t need any more major editing that I could start uploading the chapters on FFN and AO3. I’ll leave it your call if so far this fanfic has been going well or not.
I also want to give a major thanks to two alpha-readers for helping me on this revamp. I will be stating their usernames in the first chp once I start uploading.
And thank you all for taking your time on this beta-reading and the poll.
Beta-reading release for the first 5 chapters of “The Sario Effect”. Image’s not final. Summary and Link attached in this post.
Summary:It was supposed to be a normal Saturday afternoon. We deserved a break after everything we’ve been through. Then out of the blue, a kid bumped into us with a strange device. A Yeerk device. And the Yeerks want it back from her.
We don’t know what’s going on. What that device is. Or how this Controller is connected to everything. The only thing Rachel, Tobias, Cassie, Ax, Marco and I do know is that she might have the answers we need.
And she might actually be more dangerous than Visser Three himself…
Since my note regarding my fanfiction writing, I’ve re-evaluated what I wanted for my story idea: a disabled Host with a Yeerk, and reedited the entire story of the Sario Effect thanks to several peoples’ help. I do wanna give a small apology that “here we go again! Another version of this one fic I’ve made” and honestly, I feel the same as you do. This is like the fifth version and I’ve been pulling my hair wondering why on Earth did I not just make this version from the beginning.
So considering this has gone through versions, by all means, wreck this piece with all the constructive criticism to the ground. I want your harshest, honest feedback to make up for it. In order words, break my legs.
Viewers have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic. Unless I didn’t again, please inform me if that’s the case. This post will get updates in the comments from me for the next releases. Chp 6 to 10 are still in progress/refining. Once I finish my covers for this fic and editing is finished, I’ll upload this version to FFN and AO3.
Hello all, next 5 chapters have been added for beta-reading, making 10 chps in total. As mentioned above, you have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic. Please give as much feedback as possible and I hope you will enjoy it.
Beta-reading release for the first 5 chapters of “The Sario Effect”. Image’s not final. Summary and Link attached in this post.
Summary:It was supposed to be a normal Saturday afternoon. We deserved a break after everything we’ve been through. Then out of the blue, a kid bumped into us with a strange device. A Yeerk device. And the Yeerks want it back from her.
We don’t know what’s going on. What that device is. Or how this Controller is connected to everything. The only thing Rachel, Tobias, Cassie, Ax, Marco and I do know is that she might have the answers we need.
And she might actually be more dangerous than Visser Three himself…
Since my note regarding my fanfiction writing, I’ve re-evaluated what I wanted for my story idea: a disabled Host with a Yeerk, and reedited the entire story of the Sario Effect thanks to several peoples’ help. I do wanna give a small apology that “here we go again! Another version of this one fic I’ve made” and honestly, I feel the same as you do. This is like the fifth version and I’ve been pulling my hair wondering why on Earth did I not just make this version from the beginning.
So considering this has gone through versions, by all means, wreck this piece with all the constructive criticism to the ground. I want your harshest, honest feedback to make up for it. In order words, break my legs.
Viewers have the option to comment/suggest changes to the fic. Unless I didn’t again, please inform me if that’s the case. This post will get updates in the comments from me for the next releases. Chp 6 to 10 are still in progress/refining. Once I finish my covers for this fic and editing is finished, I’ll upload this version to FFN and AO3.
