#camilo fanfic
Fool in love Pt.2
Carlos Madrigal x She/them Reader with a gift
Genre: angst/fluff? it’s mostly carlos this chapter
warnings: none
tagging:@dai-tsukki-desu@m1ntyspiiees@elegantkidfansoul@yoursimpingfan@goddesslilithmoriarty@camilos-mivida@queen-of-embracing-uncertainty (Ik you didn’t ask but since you wanted a pt 2 i thought it’d be nice to tag you for it..? Sorry if you don’t wanna be tagged)
Slow update, it’s been.. roughly half a month? I’m busy with school sorry.
The next day, he went back to his usual — avoiding all tasks and maybe steal something from the bakery that’s by chance near your house even though he could’ve just asked Tia Julieta for arepas or any type of bread he wanted.
He stayed hidden in the alley, slicing his bread in half with his pocket knife to save for later. He glanced at you not so subtly as he enjoyed his breakfast.
“Are you going to keep staring like a creep or?”
He heard your unmistakable voice and looked around, trying to see who you were talking to.
“I’m talking to you, señor with the hair covering an eye while eating bread”
He gulped down his mouthful of bread, thinking if he should make a run for it. But he’s no coward so he stepped out into the light, shrugging like this was his plan all along.
“Whats a Madrigal doing here, casually watching a local anyways” You tossed the blob of an apple core you liquified up and down your hand. “don’t try to deny it, i’ve seen you there for days”
He grinned a mirthless grin, “Bold of you to assume i’m watching you, señorita.” He walked closer. You took note of how tall he is as he towered over you.
You scoffed, “whatever, see you around stalker” You turned to go back into your house, not bothering anymore since he’s not gonna answer your question.
Eventually he’ll get bored of whatever interested him and leave. right?
Wrong. He came back day after day, just standing there eerily in the shadows of the alley. Sometimes with a fruit in hand or a new trinket he snatched. You’ve learnt that his name was Carlos, the trouble maker of the Madrigals. A sort of outcast, black sheep of the family.
You noticed the townspeople didn’t really like him either (more like they completely avoided him as much as possible) and it wasn’t surprising if he thought you would’ve backed off or at least be put off by it like other people did. But you didn’t, instead you just.. sort of coexisted in silent in some sort of truce.
He would stay near you, minding his own business while you worked on chores or just watching the clouds float by.
He enjoyed the peace while you enjoyed the quiet company.
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You were laying in your usual shaded spot, enjoying the cool summer breeze while you chewed on a popsicle stick mindlessly. Until some guy decided to get real close to you while sitting, completely uncaring you’re there.
“Has anyone told you about personal space..? Because clearly you don’t know about it.” you scoffed as you sat up, now standing in front of the guy who decided to invade your space.
It was Carlos Madrigal, who’s name you had learnt. But he was.. different today. You squinted your eyes, confused. He didn’t look different. Actually he did, his expression was.. odd. not one usually seen on the scowling, pissed-off-at-everyone boy. The beauty mark was also gone. you noted.
“Uh. Are you okay.?”
“Totally, why would you assume i’m not?” He snapped back at you, but it was.. weak compared to his usual snide comments. It also had weird ups and downs in accent that he didn’t do. And was that a voice crack.?
You reached forward, pinching Carlos real hard and you watch as his image shifted and changed, turning into Camilo. You rolled your eyes, as if one madrigal wasnt enough, now there’s two.
You caught him by the back of his collar as he turned to flee, “hold it, why’re you impersonating your twin to see me”
He turned around, eyes darting everywhere.
“Look i mean no harm, i was just interested in why my brother was always out here and found out he was with you. Are you guys dating?”
You let go of his collar, “Dating him?” You snickered, “Of course not.” You quickly dissipate the thought of dating him that flashed through your head. Dating him? He was just.. nice company. Yeah. Besides you weren’t that close, he just stayed near and had short conversations with you. sometimes joining you as you laid near the riverbank or watched the stars on your roof.
Camilo seemed to be thinking, hand scratching his head absent-mindedly.
“That’s weird. Carlos doesn’t really enjoy company. I was surprised he was hanging around you so much. What’s your name anyways” He stretched his hand out, wanting to shake yours.
“Y/n, You’re done with this whole investigator thing right? I’ll go back to my nap” You shook his hand briefly so he doesn’t have his hand out awkwardly and tossed the popsicle stick that’s been in your mouth for a while into the bin next to you.
He waved, setting off with mischief in his mind as he thought of the ways he’ll tick his brother off.
He hurried home, greeting casita and passed by Mirabel who was fixing up his other torn ruana. He found Carlos leaning against the balcony and smirked, walking up to him.
“So… what’s up hermano” Carlos ignored Camilo’s question, rolling his eyes as he’s close to walking away.
“What.” He snapped, eyes narrowed and lips a thin line, annoyed his peace was disturbed. Camilo never went to him during the day unless to tell him about news.
“So hostile towards tu hermano” Camilo shook his head “Not to disturb your creepy stalker thing but Mama told me to tell you y/n’s coming over for dinner tonight.” Camilo grinned seeing Carlos’ expression change, his eyes widening.
“What’s wrong hermano?” He prodded him further, testing his patience.
Carlos turned away without a response, trying to leave.
“not so fast, whats this about?” Camilo put a hand on his shoulder. He grits his teeth and swats his hand off.
“Let go already, it doesn’t concern you.”
“You’re so obvious. It’s clear that you-“ Carlos slaps his hand over Camilo’s mouth, irritated.
“Cállate.”
“That was a joke Carlos, shes not coming over to dinner. I talked with her just now. She has a gift too, i think it’s manipulating liquids and turning things into liquid state.”
Carlos nodded, attention drifting from his brother’s words to something else, until his brother’s voice became background noise again.
“Carlos!” He snapped back to attention, closing his eyes in annoyance.
“make it short i’m tired of your ramblings”
“Do you like her.”
He turned around, unsure as well. “I don’t know” He muttered.
“Just say you do” He could already imagine the stupid smug grin Camilo was wearing. “Just cállate before Dolores-“
A small squeak could be heard behind them. Carlos facepalmed, of course she heard.
“What’s this about Carlos liking someone? Mi hermanito tolerating someone?”
Carlos had enough of this and pushed past her. “you’ve heard everything already, don’t tell anyone, got it?” He glared at her but Dolores was already turning to leave, trying not to spill the newest news she got.
“She’s gonna tell everyone. starting from mirabel and then mama” Camilo stated.
“No shit.”
“Maybe you could try confessing..?”
“We’re not.. close. At all. And what would she see in me anyways” The insecurities rose and tangled his insides into knots. Bile rose and he gulped, pushing the thoughts down.
Camilo sighed, shaking his head. There was no convincing Carlos once he set his mind to something. “I’ll leave you to your thoughts then. Hasta luego hermano.”
That night, carlos’ thoughts ran wild as the night got darker.
What if you thought the same as he did?
Unsure of your feelings as well? He knew you were sort of an outcast as well. On the surface you got along well but you didn’t have anyone close. But you had him around everyday.
Maybe his brother is right for once. He had fallen for you and he can’t seem to get enough of you — The one thing that seems nice in this town besides his family.
Sakurawan • Snippets •
Carlos Madrigal x he/them reader
Genre: angst with happy ending
Warnings: Blood.? Illness, physical and non physical fights, aggressive Carlos, cussing (all warnings might not apply to this preview but would most likely apply to other parts.)
A/n: Slow updates, new series with 2 other ones i haven’t finished. I deliver content of my boy again.
!! if you wish to use this au, prompt, illness whatever Please ask!! I created it so i uh would like people to ask before just taking it. thanks
Sakurawan: A non confirmed rare illness where Cherry blossom bud patterns grow on the patient’s neck or throat. The cherry blossoms will gradually bloom, growing around the neck and causing the patient to feel pain, discomfort and agitated until the blossoms fully bloom and the person gets choked to death. The sickness is not infectious, however it either results in full recovery or death. Remedies are unclear. It’s cause is….
He slammed the book shut. Disbelieving. Denying the truth.
“Mierda..”
Carlos shut his eyes as he laid on the grass, next to you.
“Hey principe”
“yeah?”
“.. you know that conversation we had before of me turning into a horse?”
You shoved him lightly, “Don’t you start again Carlos”
He snickered, “Vale, vale. What if… i suddenly died though”
You smacked him on the head “What are you going on about now Carlos, I swear that cabeza of yours is always up to something. And it’s New years, don’t bring yourself bad luck”
He scratched his neck gently, tracing patterns mindlessly, his mind heavy with thoughts drowning him. “Nevermind principe, was just joking around, you’re so easy to get to” He laughed.
but the smile didn’t reach his eyes as he kept a tight-lipped grin.
“It’s late principe, i’ll take you back home. Wouldn’t want some guy snatching you in the dark now would we?”
He stared in the mirror in horror. Another one had appeared. He dreaded it, the patterns that appeared as days past. Nothing worked. Not even Tia Julieta’s all curing magic. If the magic didn’t work… then what would?
He slammed the table mirror down, pacing around the room swiftly, his ruana swishing after him as he tapped his feet, letting out frustrated cusses causing Camilo to knock on his door.
“It’s 3 in the morning, Cállate or Get out of the house to do your mumbling! Dolores can’t sleep and neither can I, hermano por favor!” He heard the slam of his brother slamming the door as he retreats back into his room.
“What is up with you recently hermano?” Camilo frowned
“Nothings up. what’s it to you now?” He chided back, tone sharper than usual.
“Your attitude’s just.. sourer than usual” His brother commented.
He ignored him but Camilo continued following him, curious to why he’s in such a terrible mood.
After a few steps, He turned around, unusually pissed off and grabbed Camilo’s collar.
“Stop following me idiota.” He coldly sneered down at his shorter counterpart.
“Oh so that’s what this is?” Camilo raised his fist, frown deepening as he stood his ground. “You just wanted to fight for no reason when I was trying to care.”
Carlos swung his fist down.
Stay tuned :)
Fool in love Pt.1 (prologue?)
Carlos Madrigal x she/them reader with a gift
Genre: fluff
Warnings: none for now
note: rewrote this three times. wasn’t happy with it and i’m still not but have this sort of.. teaser?? prologue?
Tagging:@dos-oroguitas :) enjoy my humble offering and happy chinese new year
Carlos stared confused from his place in the musty alley, unsure what to do as he flicked his pocket knife open and close. He kicked a rock out of frustration, groaning as he muttered colourful words.
“Get yourself together. ¿Que pasa tonto?” He didn’t understand why he was like this right now, palms sweaty and face flushed when he caught your eyes meeting briefly (way too short to his dismay) or even just a glimpse of you.
The town had always been too boring and stuffy for him, he could care less about the townspeople. He never got along well with everyone and was infamous for getting into fights or trouble.
The shopkeepers hated him for constantly pickpocketing food, trinkets or as he called “borrowing without returning” and then disappearing without a trace into the crowds with his gift. He used his gift for himself unlike his twin Camilo whom the town adored. The townspeople often compared them and he was the black sheep of the family. Even Abuela Alma didnt like him. Almost nobody liked being around the boy with a permanent scowl, heterochromatic eyes and hair covering one eye. Even his family got fed up with his antics often.
it was fine to him. he didn’t like or wanted the attention or admiration of the town, his twin could gladly have it all as he didn’t like the town for what they had done to his long gone Tio, Bruno.
But you, this new person in town with a gift had mysteriously caught his eye, grabbing his attention. You were supposed to be just another girl in the town, avoiding him or just passing by without paying a care.
You swept him off his feet as you stayed after one of his fights and tended to him, aware of his reputation and personality. Maybe you just felt guilty or pity for him when he had a bloody nose and several bruises, nothing Tia Julieta couldn’t fix anyways. But he had stayed and let you tend to him, staring entranced at you “like a idiota” he added unhelpfully. He forgot to ask for your name or shrug you off at that moment, time stilling as he looked at you and you only.
You somehow managed to make his knees feel weak, lips curling upwards and his permanent frown gone from his face whenever he sees you. He didn’t believe in love at first sight but here he was, stalking observing you from a distance as you went on with your day.
At first he thought it was the fact that you’re someone new and had a gift that’s got him interested, but slowly he found out he was more interested in your expressions, the way your the way your hair shone, the small things that showed your mood. The way your eye twitched as you were annoyed, the clench of fists or how you curled your hair around a finger as you were deep in thought.
He shook himself out of his thoughts. He was no fool in love, he’d rather be dead than caught tripping over himself over someone. It was almost dinner anyways. He should be heading back. He glanced back at you, ears flushed red, “idiota.. what am i doing” as he quickly went home.
He’ll figure out his.. feelings and thoughts after dinner. or maybe not.
“Progress..?” Pt 2
Pairings: Camilo Madrigal x they/them reader except for the use of hermosa/ señora etc
genre: fluff
no warnings except quesadillas so sorry if you’re lactose intolerant /j
small a/n, updates are irregular (fixed the missing parts! sorry about that
As you promised, you went to La Casita for lunch the next day. You were about to knock but the doors opened themselves for you and you smiled, saying a quiet thank you as the house urged you in.
When you walked in, Dolores quickly pulled you aside.
“so….” she wiggled her eyebrows, giggling a little
“Did you have fun with mi hermano ayer en la fiesta? (With my brother yesterday at the party)”
You snorted, of course she was gonna ask that. “He’s fun company, dramatic too.” you rolled your eyes light-heartedly.
“We saw you on the tree branch with him” Isabela piped in suddenly, appearing out of nowhere, making you flinch a little.
Mirabel being the kind girl she is, came over with a glass of juice and handed you it. “I’ve never seen you talk so much at a party. Usually you’re at the sidelines, holding a drink and staring at dolores” she teased.
You took a sip of juice, looking away. “it’s nothing, jeez guys we just met, i’d admit he’s cute.. with his fluffy hair and freckles but that’s all!”
“uhuh…” Dolores nodded, unconvinced.
“alright hermosa, i won’t keep you here too long as I need to go prepare for our lunch with tía Julieta” She continued, making you choke on your drink as she stresses on the word hermosa.
“Sometimes I forget you hear everything.” You muttered, leaving the empty glass behind and wiped your mouth.
“I’ll go set the table, I think mi primo is in his room if you want to find him” Isabela chimed in, adding a wink. You groaned, looking exasperated at Mirabel while she only chuckled,
“Don’t look so done Y/n, you’ll get used to it soon enough”
‘I sure hope not…’ You thought as you heard Abuela calling everyone around for lunch. You sat next to Dolores, between her and Mirabel while Isabela and Camilo sat opposite of you all.
“Today we have a guest, Y/n who is joining us for lunch. It’s a delight to have you here with us today and I hope you enjoy the meal and company. With no further ado” Abuela raised her glass and cleared her throat. “¡Buen provecho!”
“¡Buen provecho!” rung out across the table as everyone raised their glasses. While the adults were discussing matters about the town, your side of the table was unusually quiet as you dug in.
You were having quesadillas and chicken soup, Camilo was right when he said Tia Julieta’s food was the best. You nudged Mirabel and whispered “Your mom’s an amazing cook”, she chuckled, nodding in agreement. “I know right”
Meanwhile, Camilo was trying not to stare at the way your eyes lit up, the faint dimples on your squishable cheeks when you laugh or grin at whatever Mirabel was saying.. even your voice was cute. He tried to focus on his food but it’s hard to take his eyes off of you.
He’s noticed you for months now, seeing you paint on pottery out in the yard or mixing old clay to reuse. He especially liked seeing you hum along to some songs he knows about, they became his favourite songs now and he found himself subconsciously humming them in the shower or when he’s doing chores.
“Primo!” Isabela whisper-shouted mildly annoyed. He snapped back to focus. “Si?” He frowned at his daydream being interrupted.
“You’ve been staring. hard.” She smirks.
“Have not. I’ve just been.. daydreaming. Yeah, that’s all. thinking about how good the food is” he held up his spoon, only to realise there was nothing on it and quickly put it down.
“you’re so obvious at trying to sneak glances. You’re full-on staring, not very suave now are you? Aww did mi primo get a crush now?” Isabela continued. Camilo stood up abruptly, almost making his chair fall to the ground, alerting everyone. He flushed, “i’m going to get seconds!” He exclaimed a bit too loud as he rushed to get away from the table and more specifically - isabela’s teasing.
Isabela snorted, continuing her meal. You raised an eyebrow confused but said nothing. Dolores was laughing silently next to you as she heard the whole exchange and high fived Isabela under the table.
You finished your food but wanted a bit more, “I’m going to get a few more quesadillas and check on camilo. he’s been gone for a while now”
The girls said nothing, waving you off as they engaged in small gossip.
You found Camilo back facing you next to the quesadillas as he piled food on his plate, you tapped his shoulder lightly and he turned around quickly, shapeshifting uncontrollably as he didn’t expect it was you.
“Hey uh you enjoying the food?” He cursed himself for the awkward talk but forced a confident grin.
“Yep, you were right, your Tia’s food is amazing.” You bumped his elbow, smiling reassuringly. “You’re kinda jumpy today. What’s up”
“Nothings up! Just daydreaming about food.” He cringed at his lame excuse. you weren’t gonna buy this. even he didn’t believe himself.
“okay..?” You said, unsure as you didn’t quite believe him but if he didn’t want to say it then whatever. The atmosphere was getting awkward so you jokingly shoved a piece of chicken in his mouth. “C’mon, after we’re done eating you can show me around your room”
He grinned, “Already? Not even a first date tesoro?” He said between bites of chicken.
You elbowed him lightly, “You know that’s not what I meant Camilo. And finish your food or you’ll bite your tongue”
“Damn. worth a shot I guess” He shrugs, “thought I’d get to see you flustered but guess today’s not my lucky day”
You rolled your eyes at him, ignoring his statement.
When you got back to the table, Isabela and Dolores were looking at you, a teasing look in their eyes while Mirabel shook her head at you, mouthing “I tried”.
“What took you guys so long?” Dolores started.
“Oh Dolores, you know how young love is, don’t you” Isabela laughed.
You flushed, “We were just chatting that’s all, Now hush and let me finish my meal” You kicked Isabela’s chair leg gently, looking disapprovingly at her. She shrugged it off with a sly grin.
“I’ll be at my room if you need me, gonna tend to my cactus” She left the table as the rest of the family members went on with their day while you finished the meal with Camilo. When you offered to help wash the dishes, Tía Pepa merely shooed you, telling you you’re a guest and to call her Pepa. You heard a giggle as Dolores whispered on the second floor “soon she’ll be calling her mama”.
Camilo’s ears tinged red when he heard that, he grabbed your hand, deciding to go have some peace and quiet with you in his room (and to avoid his cousins and hermana’s teasing before he blushes and embarrassed himself further)
“Now who’s the eager one?” you grinned as he tugged you to his room. He shook his head, “i’m just going along with what you said just now preciosa, would be rude to deny a guest’s request.” You laughed, “So courteous now?” He gripped your hand a bit tighter, “Haven’t i always been courteous to you?” he faked sadness in his tone, making you laugh again.
He led you to his room, opening the door and stepping aside, bowing slightly, “after you, señora” You grabbed his hand, “come on Camilo, tonto”
“whatever you want bonita” He mumbled, staring at your conjoined hands lovingly.
.
.
after spending time in his room and being amazed at how his room can also shapeshift according to his mood, you went home before dusk as it was getting late and hugged your friends goodbye.
Before leaving, Camilo invited you to come along whenever you wanted to and you laughed, “You’re never getting rid of me now Camilo”
“Why would I want to get rid of you hermosa?” which caused you to look away, flustered, making him grin, feeling victorious. “Go before your parents kill me for making you stay after dark, you’ll be back tomorrow right..?” He asked hesitantly.
“Por supuesto (of course) Camilo, Didnt know you enjoyed my company that much “ and you walked off, the sunset highlighting your frame.
‘You have no idea how much I enjoy your company do you’ he muttered to himself, a lovesick smile on his face.
That was when he knew, he was absolutely smitten with you.
my easter break is coming up and i promise guys i will answer my inbox and update PUTD, life has been super super hectic recently & i thank you all so much for your patience and kindness <3
