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“Seriously? Can’t you two wait ten more minutes?” Emmy asked as she looked at the couple having sex in the kitchen.

Both Cami and Scott looked over at Emmy as she entered the room but they didn’t stop what they were doing. Cami was bent over the counter and Scott was standing behind her with his hands holding both of her hips tight enough that his fingers were pressing into her flesh. Scott was thrusting into Cami’s pussy at a slow rhythmic pace and from the look on his face he was perfectly happy with how things were going. Cami on the other hand was pushing on the wall with her hands to keep her head from banging into the various containers on the counter. Despite this inconvenience she too seemed pretty happy with the current state of the morning kitchen fuck session.

“Can you pass the coffee creamer please?” Emmy asked of no one in particular. The creamer was pinned between Cami’s shoulder and the refrigerator and Emmy couldn’t get it without coming in contact with her sister or her sister’s boyfriend. Emmy really didn’t want to get any nearer than necessary.

Neither Cami nor Scott made any effort to retrieve the creamer.

Emmy put half an English Muffin in the toaster and slid the lever down to start toasting the muffin. “Cami, the creamer! Please? Hey, James Deen,” Emmy said to Scott, “give her a break for five seconds so she can get me the creamer.”

Neither Scott or Cami follow the directions. Instead Scott thrust deep into Cami and leaned forward to grab the creamer. Scott’s weight pushed Cami forward causing her head to crash into the container of sugar knocking it over and spilling its contents. Cami yelped but once Scott stood back up he handed the creamer to Emmy and went back fucking her little sister.

Emmy got a plate for her muffin and cup for the coffee. Cami was resting her head on the counter and was facing Emmy with the spilt sugar in front of her face.

“You don’t mind if I take a little of this?” Emmy asked Cami while taking a half spoonful of the sugar and stirring it to her coffee. Emmy turned and walked to the little kitchenette and sat down.

Emmy took a sip of her coffee and spoke, “You know Scott, I think you just about have her to the point of no return. She hasn’t said a word since I walked in and I’m almost positive she couldn’t talk if she wanted to.”

Scott looked over at Emmy for a brief second before squeezing Cami’s hips a light tighter and slamming deep into her.

“I hate to say it but she’s really sexy like that. She has the little arch in her back which causes her butt to stick up and she’s always had really nice long legs. If you don’t mind, let me offer one little piece of advice. Rub her clit right now and I bet you she will be completely gone.”

Scott slipped one hand from Cami’s hip down between her legs. Once his fingertip found Cami’s clit it was a matter of seconds before Cami’s eyes snapped open, “I fucking hate y…” Cami started to say before her words changed into a long series of cat like purrs. She pressed her forehead down into the counter and pulled her arms back slightly with her fingers flared out wide. Her left leg started shaking uncontrollably and droplets of her cum started to drip to the floor. Scott suddenly thrust deep into Cami causing her to crash into the remaining containers on the counter as a small gush of Cami’s cum splashed on the floor. Scott was well into his own orgasm and kept thrusting deeper into Cami as her body shook.

Scott slumped down into Cami’s back and pressed her into the spilt contents of the containers.

“Well, I can honestly say I’ve never had the opportunity to watch a live sex show before. Don’t get me wrong you guys were pretty good and I have to give you some props. It was impressive but…” Emmy paused, “… watching my little sister get fucked while I eat breakfast is one thing I never wanted to see.”

Scott moved his hips back away from Cami and his spent cock slipped out of her body.

She reached over and grabbed a napkin off the table, “Here, you might, umm, need this.” Emmy said while glancing at Scott’s cum covered cock.

Emmy looked at the small puddle on the floor and the wetness down Cami’s thighs and grabbed another napkin. She held it out towards Cami, “umm, you, too!”

As Cami stepped toward Emmy to retrieve the napkin a look of panic crossed her face and she darted her hands between her legs. It was too late and a large load of white cum fell free from her pussy and loudly splatted on the floor near Emmy’s shoes. The splattering cum shot out in all directions and got on Cami’s ankles. It also sprayed backward between her legs and lastly, forward onto both of Emmy’s black high heels.

“I’m sorry,” Cami sheepishly offered.

“No, no, I mean these things happen, right? I’m sure in dozens of places around the city something exactly like this just happened.” Emmy got up and moved to the doorway before stopping. She slipped out of her shoes and stepped back.

“Please clean the kitchen and my shoes. When I get home tonight we need to have a little talk,” Emmy said.

“Emm, don’t worry. We’ll clean up everything. We didn’t do this on purpose, it just kind of happened. We’ll be there tonight. I’m so sorry.”

“No, I don’t want drippy dick there tonight,” Emmy said looking at Scott’s limp cock. “Just you and me.”

Cami quickly took Scott’s napkin and wiped the dripping cum from his cock, “Okay, just us. I’m sorry, it just happened.”

Emmy shook her head as she started to walk away as her little sister started dabbing at Scott’s wet cock.

“Kneel down and use your mouth. You know I like that after we fuck,” Scott finally spoke.

“shhhh, wait ‘til she leaves. I’m already in enough trouble with the nun. I really wish she would find some guy that will fuck her so she’ll stop bothering us,” Cami said in a whisper just before the door to the house slammed shut.

The “Where Have You Been andi, It’s Been Six Months” Update

It’s been a long time, hasn’t it?

Not that it’s been a big thing. My follower count here has been steady, but I feel like 90% of my followers no longer visit Tumblr. Probably higher?

No matter. It’s been about 6 months since I last posted something, so I might as well update and explain what’s going on.

Bad Cuts

When I last posted, I was recovering from a knife injury. That sapped all the motivation I had in completing the standing projects I had at that time. After I mostly recovered from that, I entered a depressive funk for unrelated reasons for about a month. Eventually, I recovered, especially when I realized I needed to move from my old place. 5 years in a glorified basement was long enough. So I made an effort, and two months ago I moved to a nice new place. A week after I moved in, the landlords decided to sell the building. You see how this is all going.

Regardless, I made slow strides in finishing up what projects I could. And now I can say I made enough significant progress to talk about them! So let’s do that, and be on with it.

A Long Trip, Part 2

So, I’m at a point where I can say I’m finished with Part 2 of A Long Trip to Nowhere Important. As it stands, though, it’s about 4 times as long as Part 1, and possibly longer than [REDACTED RETCONNED NOVELLA]. Who knew that introducing a new character would be so difficult?

Furthermore, I’m at a standstill. I’m undecided whether to add yet another sex scene. It sounds like the weirdest point to be undecided, I know, especially when there’s some character development that is possible through that sex scene. But I’m also just…you know, kind of done with this part? And I kind of want to move to edits so I can move to Part 3, where another character will be introduced. (Joy!)

At this point, I’m going to hold off doing anything further until I deal with the other two projects first.

A Fun Little Swim, Part 2

This one is in editing stages still mainly because I haven’t done anything to edit it since I heard back from the new editor (who thankfully is still around). I’ll be reaching out to them to let them know that I am working on it again, and then we’ll see if we can make another round of edits work.

The Great Lake

This one…well, this one is about to get interesting. First off, I finally went and finished Chapter 3 of this story this past week! Huzzah! Of course, now I’ve all but completely forgotten the entire arc I had in mind for this story, buuuut at the very least certain parts of it will remain. I know the ending at least, I know the parts I want in there.

But here’s where things get interesting: I once again have no editor to look at this. The person I have editing A Fun Little Swim was reading this from the perspective of it being a monster piece. The Great Lake is more…futa-centric. And honestly, they’re not into that stuff, which is fine.

As I finished up Chapter 3, though, I began to think that I couldn’t just constantly hold out hope that an editor will show up and look these stories over for free, much as I would like them to. Not to mention I’ve lost touch with my original editor, who was…having a time in this pandemic. Moreover, these stories are unique in that I wrote them on my handy typey thing (aka Freewrite Traveler. Aside: Can I just say the Hemingwrite they just showed off recently was…kind of an overpriced joke?).

Eventually I came up with, or perhaps accepted, the idea that I should just publish these regardless of whether they’ve gotten polish from an editor or not. Admittedly, it’s frustrating because I risk getting whacked with poor ratings. But at the same time, it does mean that I will actually publish more than one story this year! How about that!

So I’ve been doing my best the last couple days polishing up The Great Lake into something decent. Then I will submit the first chapter to Literotica. I will probably do that tomorrow. Yes, you heard right: We might have something new by the end of August!

If these first three chapters do well, I may move to do the same to some other stories that have been gathering cobwebs (though not all of them) for lack of an editor. Scene from an Abandoned Bathroom in particular stands out in this regard. If they don’t do well…I’ll just chalk them up as a loss, and go back to seeking out editors.

The Immediate Future

So, this is what the plan looks like for the next month, month and a half:

  • August-September(ish):The Great Lake, Chapters 1-3
  • September/October:A Fun Little Swim, Part 2
  • September (maybe): Scene From An Abandoned Bathroom

No guarantees though. We’ll see how this all pans out.

Anyway, take care. And hopefully the next blog post will happen before the end of February.

January/February Update

Hey there everyone. I hope you’re doing okay.

Going to summarize what follows below here: I have a new editor I’m working with on a trial run, I completed at least one story and am nearing completion on another, and my momentum got whacked by injuries.

Editors!

So I finally managed to get a new editor to work on stories. So far, we’ve worked on A Fun Little Swim, Part 2. A second draft is in the works, should be ready in a couple weeks.

I may also endeavor to use StoriesOnline’s editors. Depending on the situation, I may have another story worked as well. But hey, at the very least, I’m making progress in dealing with my backlog. And just in time, too, because…

Stories!

I got more stories in the pipeline! The next part of A Long Trip to Nowhere Important has made a lot of progress. I may split it to multiple parts, though, given it’s much larger than I anticipated (already at 12k total and it’s probably going to be another 3-4k). It also inspired an alternate ending that I may do in the future. I really enjoy writing this story, it’s so much fun

I also completed the second chapter and got well into the third chapter of The Great Lake. After the third is complete, I’ll seek out edits for the set of three.

Underneath Her Skin I’m putting on ice. I like the idea, but I’m not sure how I feel about how things are set up with it. I might go back to the topic at some point.

I was actually hoping to get both A Long Trip Part 2 and The Great Lake 1-3 done this month, as a sort of personal goal. But then…

Injuries!

I sliced my finger making soup

I’m fine, though I had to go to the ER to get stitches. Consequently, though, the creative momentum I had going into February kind of collapsed. I haven’t really written much since then. Unfortunate, really, but it happens.

My hope is that next month, with editing, I’ll start regaining momentum and writing things again.

Anyway, that’s all for now. I should possibly have an update in March, depending on how fast I get A Fun Little Swim done. Take care, and remember to practice good knife etiquette. That way you don’t get injured!

Hey there everyone. It’s been a while. Let’s talk, shall we?

Sylvia Confronts Her Nightmare

The first part of this story, based entirely on the mini-set, is done, draft-wise. It’s rather big at under 12k words, something I want to address in edits. I’ll be posting it in the usual haunts, but also sending it along to Dizzy to see what he thinks.

New Stories(?!)

Yes, you heard that right. The past year, I’ve been a little hesitant to write new stuff post A Long Trip To Nowhere Important. My backlog got huge. 

And then I got this:

Yes, a Freewrite Traveler. (I got it on pre-order, so no, I didn’t pay full price) I call it my typey thing! 

It’s actually been really useful in just letting myself write stuff on a whim rather than let ideas stew, then start writing only to get distracted, etc. etc.

The folder you see there contain stories I’ve been writing. One of those is already complete and the start of a new series, this one using original characters for once! To briefly summarize it:

Mavis, an intersex woman, has lived a pretty terrible life. Just recently, she got kicked out of a relationship (and town) when her secret was revealed. Traveling into the woods to find some solace, she stumbles upon a mysterious lake, with some very friendly folks to put her mind and body at ease. But what is the nature of the lake? And what does it have in store for Mavis? 

I’m halfway through the second part, but I can already envision the full arc being about 6-8 parts. Based on a suggestion by my editor, I may start writing these in shorter chunks to make it easier to read/edit. The second part is halfway done ish. 

The third story is another series idea I come up with, far more embryonic (though I have 2-3 parts planned out in my head). It revolves around the idea of “shedding your skin.” Let’s leave it at that for now.

Regardless, one thing remains unresolved: editing.

The Editor Issue

Editors are something I’ve had a lot of trouble getting to help. Obviously, it would never be easy since most of these stories I’m doing for free. But still. I had a trusted editor, but they have been going through a lot of issues in 2020, and they were always a bit trouble to reach in the past. A huge part of me feels guilty for letting them go for now. But at this point, I’m held up with such a backlog that I just need to clear these stories outright so I can move on with new stuff.

I’ll be looking at getting new editors in the coming weeks and months at this point. How remains uncertain. Some of the stories will not be available through LE, so I may avoid using their system. I’ll keep you posted.

In any case, that’s all for now. Happy New Year, and keep your pants on.

Geez, it’s been a while. I don’t know what else to really say to that. Part of this is my fault, since I spent late August/early September on vacation (Which was really nice. I saw ducks! And a mooooose) and kind of just forgot about checking in.

Anyway, updates, per usual.

Collabs!

Sluggish on that front. Sent some proposals, but not all to Chimera46. My hope is I get the rest done in October.

Scripts!

That has more progress being done with them. A few are actually complete, and I just need to make a couple revisions before sending them off. Then I’ll move on to some new stuff there. I also worked out a potential animation script in my head (mostly writing up lore stuff) for another artist that I tried reaching out to recently, but I haven’t heard anything from. I don’t think anyone else has either lately shrug

Stories!

Surprisingly, I’ve done quite a bit of work on a couple different stories at this point. Let’s go over some of them, shall we?

Those Who Came Before: This awaits final edits, with the hope that it should be published soon.

A Long Trip To Nowhere Important: So, I decided to start writing Part 2! This will involve Sasha’s first run-in with Sylvia. Sylvia’s quite different from her main universe counterpart in many ways…but also the same in others. I’m about 50-60% done with this text, all of which I’ve done in the last week. I also scribbled out a lot of lore for the series. I think it’ll work great.

Sylvia Confronts Her Nightmare: At some point in August, I felt compelled to write up a story based on Sylvia’s meeting with her “nightmare” This is about 40% complete. I’m not sure if/when I’ll get back to it, but it’s still something to do.

Finally, one of my editors has finally re-surfaced. This might mean more stories get put out? Maybe? Let’s hope so

That’s all for now. Fall is coming, and it’s actually looking…fallish. Maybe more stories will develop. I’ll keep you posted. Maaaaybe write a post next month? We’ll see. Take care.

6 years already…?So I got an email this morning saying this Tumblr is 6 years old. It’s hard

6 years already…?

So I got an email this morning saying this Tumblr is 6 years old. It’s hard to imagine that I’ve been involved in 3DX for that long. I’d been around erotica for a bit longer than that, but it’s only around then that I started taking on my work under the name andi guinness. So much has happened since then, etc. etc.

The circumstances have obviously changed a lot. 2020…well, what can be said that hasn’t been already? I can’t even say anything worth noting, because you’ve already heard it in one way or another. So much noise, like the cicadas I hear outside right now…only 1000-fold.

On the 3DX/erotica front…I’ve all but lost an editor, and I’ve gained one. Projects have been sporadic, but I’ve made efforts to work with artists, some of which I’ll describe below. My hopes of starting my own work in animation have been halting at best. Problem is, as always, motivation. It’s weird, too: It’s not even a specific motivation to do work in Blender that’s the issue at hand, it’s to do anything, really. I feel like YouTube and Twitch are partly to blame, with me just using it as my replacement to TV. But there are even nights where I just kind of stare into space for hours at a time, unmotivated to do anything. That’s a problem. I wouldn’t blame it on the current state of affairs outside, though, since this was always evident for me.

I have to make changes in some of the things I do. I have plans to do that. A trip I’m planning now may offer some needed direction. I won’t say where and how, but perhaps this is what I’ve needed to do for some time. I’m also going to try new things, such as exercise. I’ve always been wanting to do that, but again, motivation escapes me. What I have planned may give me that motivation.

Regardless, it’ll be hard to say where I’ll be come next month or the month after mentally. Still, I’m hopeful.

Anyway, project updates:

Those Who Came Before

This story has received significant edits and another review round. It needs one more round before I’m satisfied with publishing it. I think some of the changes I did are for the better, makes the story more erotic and less porn.

In regards to the other stories, nothing has changed. That said…

A Retcon?!

Earlier this month, Dizzydills finally resurfaced after being absent from the community for over 7 months. Among the things he did (including a new set) was announcing changes in his overall storyline. Those included retconning all the previous episodes that he’s published into an isolated timeline, ala Star Wars Legends. The new storyline integrates one of his previous series, Secrets of the Pharaoh, as a prequel to the rest of the series.

How does this affect my own DD stories? Not much. They’ve always been kind of apocryphal. On a personal level, though, A New Suit and Those Who Came Before are affected by the retcon, since both rely on the original storyline to provide context. The latter less so than the former. The Sasha origin story that’s been stuck is also affected to some degree. A Fun Little Swim is unaffected because it was always a side story that merely takes place in the same timeline, not the same narrative. A Long Trip To Nowhere Important is a completely different timeline of my own creation, so it’s unaffected as well.

New Collabs!

So I have been working with two artists of late, with some writing and planning to boot. The first I’ve mentioned before, the talented and overly self-deprecating Chimera46. I can provide a bit more detail on this: The narrative, set in Chimera’s fantasy world, involves slime girls to some degree, a concept I’ve always been fascinated by. I won’t go into further detail than that though. This currently in planning stages, and hopefully will get somewhere over the next few months.

I’ve also been working a little bit with an artist named Judge3DX. A very talented artist who is a regular in Dizzy’s forum, he does some amazing work involving more…interesting subjects. The image you see atop is not Tilen, but a character inspired by Tilen currently named Maia. I’ve helped develop two narratives with him, one involving Maia and the other involving another OC, Becky. I may reveal an outline of the latter project in Dizzy’s forum. Hopefully we’ll see more of them, as soon as Judge posts them somewhere

Script Practice…?

Per working with Chimera46, one thing I’ve taken to do is scriptwriting practice. Namely, I’ve been writing drafts of scripts for ideas that have been percolating in my head for the last couple years. Small, short scripts. The point of these is to get a better grip on my dialogue for 3DX animation (something I’ve been critiqued on by trusted folks), and to develop a stronger sense of rhythm, along with just getting back into writing with this method.

None of these practice drafts may see the light of day anytime soon, though they have the potential of going somewhere if the cards play right. And yet, doing this has opened up new ideas in my mind for scripts that could actually become something more.

Chimera46 has told me time and again that I should write for adult VO artists, since I definitely have some talent in it. The problem is I’ve always been a bit leery of adult VO recording, mainly because so much of it is POV-centric with fetishes I don’t really care for (straight incest, femdom and other BDSM aspects of that nature, etc.). That said, there are ideas in my head for stuff that could work in a VO-only setting that aren’t any of the aforementioned. As I practice more, I might look into writing these out and seeing who would be willing to record. We’ll see though.

Anyway, that’s enough for now. I’ll try to update a little more often, but keep in mind I’ve been struggling to come up with anything to say lately, and I’m bit wary of using Twitter as a dumping ground for my thoughts, because it just comes off as so…solipsistic.

Take care. And remember: Ducks love peas.


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On Silhouettes and OCsSo I posted a bit of story in a forum recently. (”Scene in an abandoned bathro

On Silhouettes and OCs

So I posted a bit of story in a forum recently. (”Scene in an abandoned bathroom,” in case you’re wondering) Since it’s still a draft, I asked for some input. The one response I got said something that struck me: That I lack character descriptions. Well, not completely lack character descriptions, but I describe my characters so little, it’s hard to know what they look like. To be fair, they were right, but I couldn’t really imagine myself describing them in the first place.

It got me thinking a lot about what I write in general.

I’ve been involved in the 3DX scene in one capacity or another for nearly 7 years now, after being an off/on fan for a few years before that. The bulk of what I’ve written and published are stories using characters created by someone else. I’ve very rarely createdcharacters myself.

My first piece on Literotica, The Alleyway, is an original story with original characters. However…I don’t remember much about the lead character’s appearance. I remember her dress. That’s about it. I could remember the way the story played out pretty well despite not having looked at it in years - the actions, the behaviors, the dialogue - but I don’t remember much about what the girl looked like.

Whenever I’ve run into artists that I’ve liked, my impulse is less to just follow them. I want to write stories about their characters. The big thing about 3DX and erotic art in general is that most it is just straight-up porn: Focus on the poontang, as it were. While that’s good and all, I feel it’s, well, rather shallow to me. I’m more interested in what got them to that moment, and what happens afterward. The erotic isn’t just about the sex. It’s about what comes before it, what triggers it, and what occurs afterward. An image of a woman in an empty bathroom covered in cum with nobody else around can be just as powerful, if not more so than depicting what got her in this state. The reason for this, of course, is because we want to imagine what got her there. (Ironically, said image is what inspired “Scene in an abandoned bathroom.”) 

So it’s never that I want to write an erotic story these days, it’s that I want to write about a certain character that somebody else already has made. More often than not, these characters don’t have anything to them other than their visual appearance. I want to spend time developing them into actual people with personalities, thoughts, feelings, behaviors, ambitions/goals, and the like. In other words, the internal aspects of what makes a person a person. That stuff really interests me.

By the same token, though, I’ve done very little with creating my own characters on an external level. I don’t know why I can’t be bothered, though, to be honest. It could be a number of reasons: The fact that I’m more concerned about the internal aspects, some elements of perfectionism in terms of defining who these characters are, not being sure or just apathetic as to what my characters should look like, general apathy towards such aspects as visual appearance, worries that spending time defining these characters’ physical appearances is time that could be spent writing stories, recalling certain fans in 3DX being overly obsessed with their OCs’ appearances (down to their belly buttons), and so on. 

As a result, I’ve only created two OCs throughout all this. One is Tilen, who you see as my avatar. However, Tilen hasn’t been involved in much of anything. She’s been in two 2D commissions (one completed by SpewlingMews, one incomplete by Alice X), a smattering of single 3D images (by The Dude, DBSpencer, gazukull, JimJim, morfium, Cryavision, Dest, and her original visual creator Vaesark), and a mini-set by Vaesark. I once had visions of her going on some big sexual adventure, and recruited morfium to make it. But that fell to the wayside. Since then, she’s really just an avatar and a guest to someone else’s story, nothing more. The other is Leila Mehri, a character set in Madscientist’s 80s story Infested Alley. However, since Madscientist has kind of dropped off of creating art, I’ve lost interest in developing her further.

With this in mind, I find it fascinating how people in hentai and 3DX are so capable of creating OCs at the drop of a hat, whereas I struggle with creating them. At the same time, most of these OCs are made for the purpose of specific scenes or ideas, with little thought of them as people. Compare that to me turning characters - Tara, Sayako, Cerene, Sophia, Suzi, a lesser extent Sasha and Sylvia, Kayla, Yelena, Breana - into memorable women by virtue of their personalities and behaviors. 

I guess the way one could look at it is that while most people just make their characters are paper cutouts or wax statues, I build silhouettes: Fully functional but featureless.

A good writer, I suspect, needs to do both: Create a character that is externally and internally memorable. But that is something I have trouble with. I don’t feel compelled nor interested in describing my characters on a visual level. They could be anyone visually.  Maybe that’s why I latch on to other people’s characters so quickly, because they’ve done that work for me, whereas I could work out the inner details. A quid pro quo, as it were.

It’s an unfortunate thing, really, but I don’t know what I could do to fix all that. If I’m not interested in something, I just don’t do it. And to make me do it just fills me with rage and contempt.


Just some introspection for the new year. More on stories later.


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