FREDDY EVENT, send in requests for any of Freddy Carter’s characters (NOT the man himself (= no Freddy Carter (the real person) x readers), only his characters)!! The event will be on for an indefinite time, if you’re unsure, see if the event post is pinned. If it is, then it’s still on. (Other requests are open too, but they go to my normal to-do list which I’m not able to start doing anytime soon)
Summary: Y/N’s cousin Zoe arrives on the island, and soon the Pony Squad is shipping Y/N with the stable boy who she’s head over heels for. requested by anon
Pillow Princeby@dntaewithluvestablished relationship Summary:Looks like you and Taehyung both have surprises in store for celebrating your 3 year wedding anniversary.
[drabble]by@lamourchepreschool teacher!Taehyung, single mom!reader Summary:“Good thing I didn’t ask for your opinion.” and “They’re not your kids, back the f*ck off.”
The Gardenby@gukyistrangers to lovers, bookstore au Summary:There’s always been something quite captivating about bookstores with flowers and cute boys in the window.
How Not Toby@jeonsjiddiesstrangers to lovers, vet!reader Summary:Taehyung takes Tannie to the vet and develops a crush on the vet, and proceeds to tell a few white lies to see her again.
Yourselfby@bubmygestablished relationship, vampire au Summary:“You can ask me as much as you want, I’ll say I love you each time.”
Kiss It Betterby@thatlongspringnightestablished relationship Summary:One to two bottles of wine, and the entire world at your fingertips.
Have Mercyby@adoredcores established relationship, PWP Summary:His thoughts were running wild. His bulge was slowly becoming more and more noticeable. His throat was also becoming to run dry. Lord have mercy on his soul.
Words I Want to Sayby@army-authorfriends to lovers Summary:“First second I saw you and I couldn’t get over how beautiful you were.”
Early Celebrationby@joonsgotthejuices establsihed relationship, idol au, PWP Summary:He should wait until you’re back home, but Taehyung couldn’t help himself when you looked this good and he’s had quite a bit to drink.
Tumblr will be banning adult content starting the 17th of December…
As title says, adult content will no longer be welcome on Tumblr from the 17th of December. That means my blog and many other good adult blogs will be gone. I will then only have Instagram but obviously, I can’t post cum pics, bulges and whatnot there.
It is unfortunate that Tumblr is taking the anti democratic approach of punishing the whole fetish community here because a few nasty blogs had child pornography on them, which lead to Tumblr being removed from the Apple app store.
The child porn will just move elsewhere, most likely to the dark web where most of it resides. You have not saved a single child from abuse. And why not just ban the child porn blogs? Common sense is a concept that @staff doesn’t understand.
I sincerely hope your company stock plummets as you loose the advert income from the 22% of traffic that leads to adult blogs. I hope you lose 16.45% of your total user base, as those make up blogs with only adult content. Your Stalinist practices are vile. Just because adult content is offensive to some special special snowflakes doesn’t mean your actions are justified.
The internet is, and will forever be offensive. If you can’t handle that, unplug your ethernet cable and throw away your computer.
I want to ask my followers: do you know any free of charge platform, that allows adult content, where I can share my pics?
Summary:In the December prior to the pandemic, you spend Christmas with Chris in Boston, a first time meeting between you and his extended family. You struggle with implications of seriousness this milestone has on your relationship with Chris.
Warnings: Angst, Pandemic backdrop, Profanity, healthy dose of Fluff, sprinkle of Sexual suggestiveness
Notes: So much was really working against me getting this up for y’all lol, but nothing worth having comes easy, right? Anyways, tried some new stuff I learned in some articles I read, more showing, less telling. Allusions and metaphors. We’ll see how it comes across. Christmas in October anyone?Read the previous part here!
The ding DONG of the doorbell echoes so exaggeratedly, it had to have been your imagination. No, I’m really here now. With your blood pumping loudly in your ears, you stare straight ahead at the barrier to entry, and seemingly to your happy future.
A Christmas-covered front door shouldn’t cause you this much stress, but here you were, feeling mocked by smiling snowmen and delicate, origami snowflakes.
You try to focus instead on one of the many thoughts flurrying your mind.
Your comments ?s and such are ALWAYS appreciated any way you’d like to send them. Sorry I don’t snap or kik.
I would however like feedback on videos I’m posting, especially the embeded ones (ones with a gray box in your combined follow scroll through) since I don’t have the mobile app, I’d like to know if they are working. My apologies if they aren’t, but from my stats it looks like some are able to view them.
Just remember the embeded videos WILL play once you’re INSIDE my blog. THEY WILL NOT take you to a 3rd party porn site as plain links will. You can watch them just as if they were uploaded to tumblr. The advantage is the video isn’t limited to 5 minutes.
I have sever gigs of trib on my hd but tumblr. simply will not let me upload any of it, so this was my only other choice, because let’s face it, at some point I’ll run out of videos on here. A lot of them continue to be deactivated as time goes on.
Half in the Shadows; Half Burned in the Flames(Multiple Parts, Ongoing)by@buttercup–beeDin Djarin x F!Reader, The Reader and the Child survived Order 66 together. After parting ways, the Reader runs into a Mandalorian that’s carrying the Child she once saved. Warnings: violence, contains spoilers for the Child’s name
Confidence(Oneshot/Request, 1.1k words)by@theboredwritertmDin Djarin x F!Pregnant!Reader, the Reader makes a mess and Din helps her clean it up. Warnings: pregnancy, nausea, suggestive content, and fluff.
Untitled fic(Headcanons/Request)by@thefanbasewhoreDin Djarin x F!Reader, Din sees the Reader in a dress for the first time and is crushing hard. Warnings: Din and the Reader are not together and sexual tension.
“you deserve this”(Oneshot, 0.5k words)by@a-dorinDin Djarin x Reader, Din helps the Reader relax. Warnings: language, nudity, and teasing.
In My Heart I Already Know(Oneshot, 1.2k words) by@raiseyourcupsDin Djarin x Reader, Din has a hard day and the Reader tries to make it better. Warnings: none other than the Reader brefly mentions filling like a housewife but there didn’t seem to be anything to indicate a female reader.
Hard Decisions (Oneshot, 2.8k words)by@ollypoppS2E7 SPOILERS, Din Djarin x Reader, the Reader goes into the Empire base with Din and Mayfield and comes across a slight they didn’t expect to see. Warnings: violence, angst, language, misunderstandings, mentions of war and death. AGAIN, S2E7 SPOILERS!!!
Oberyn Martell
Blood in the Rivers(Multiple Parts, Completed) by @ficslike-reblogged Oberyn Martell x Ellaria Sand x F!Reader, In order to keep herself and her family safe, the Reader begins playing a dangerous game in order to come out of this alive with her family. In order to do this, she needs allies and along the way finds the two people she wants to spend the rest of her life with. Warnings: violence, murder, sexism, smut, depression, attempted sexual assault, mentions of death, unhealthy coping, and war.
In Name Only(Multiple Parts, Ongoing)by@forever-rogueOberyn Martell x F!Reader, Against her will, the Reader is being sent off to Sunspear for an arranged marrage with the Prince. Upon arrival, the Reader and the Prince strike a deal to be married in name only and she finds that life in Sunspear isn’t as bad as she believed. Warnings: arranged marrage, language, slow burn, sexism, angst, suggestive content, smut, and violence.
Pedro Pascal Characters
Cold Day(Headcanons)by@girlwithanewplanHeadcanons for spending a cold day in with the boys. Warnings: mentions of sex and fluff.
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 8.2k
—Warning(s):This work contains (18+) mature content. Minors, DNI.
The confession serves its purpose—your therapist loses her impassive, stoic face for the first time in fifteen minutes and lifts both eyebrows at you.
Her first reaction in every session is always worth it.
“Terrifies?” Her lips purse in an upside, surprised frown. “Why is that?”
Now that you’ve quit stalling, the pressure on your chest builds up and spreads like wildfire. So many images of the last month flash across your eyes, thousands and countless little moments that you could pinpoint as the answer—he laughs and it crinkles the corner of his eyes, when he and his son speak together it feels like planets aligning, the way he looks at me, that time at the fair, and that one time at the movie theater—your body shudders.
“Well, he’s really fucking good in bed, to begin with.”
—Summary: When your best friend Sarah recommends you a mechanic of her brother’s trust, all you can think about and pray to is that he doesn’t rip you off. Your car is your prized possession and amidst all the worry and concern of your medical studies, drowning in even more debt sounds as suffocating as it would be.
Of course, you never thought of the possibility of the mechanic being the problem. A hot, polite, gentle, and silent-type of problem.
Drowning in debt would be easier to navigate than the blue of Bucky Barnes’s eyes.
—Word count: 6.1k
—A/n:This is the SECOND chapter of the series. If you enjoy it, feedback is appreciated & highly encouraged and motivates me to write even more. mistakes/errors might be here, let me know if you find any. A huge thanks to Raven, my beta, for proofreading and eliminating all mistakes in this chapter.
Ps.: any typos in the phone conversations are Bucky’s, okay? they’re meant to be there klahsakjs. his hands are dirty w/ grease leave him alone <3
During the first 48h, you pretend that each glance to your phone is just the regular technology-based obsession, and not you waiting for a very specific text message.
Sarah brings your sandwiches, you have to wake up a couple of hours earlier to navigate the city without your baby and things go smoothly.
You’re cool. Bucky could take the time he needed; he was clearly a busy man—you’d seen the number of cars in his shop and he saw you as an emergency, after waiting for you to drop by for days, may it be added.
The only person anxious was Sarah.
“I never thought you’d be this good at keeping your mouth shut.” She’s sitting in front of you, both of you lying on her apartment’s living room floor after a busy night of papers and eating crappy food. “I’m almost impressed.”
“I told you before: there’s nothing else to tell.”
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 6.5k
—Warning(s):This work contains (18+) mature content. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex (daddy ink, oral, pentration, etc, etc.), mentions of drug use, mature language and mentions of death.
In the short months you’ve shared with him, the luxury of waking up next to Bucky only happened exactly two times.
In both of them, you spent the whole rest of the day feeling the ghost of his scruff nuzzling against the nape of your neck, the sweet, barely-there kiss he placed right after before he got up from bed or stirred away, untangling himself from you.
This time, Bucky has no reservations.
You know that because the first thing you feel is not his beard, or his kiss, or even the gentle, adorable shimmy thing he does with his body where he wants to fit both of you together like a puzzle piece.
Every single word has meaning and i inmerssed myself in this beautiful story completely, to say I enjoyed every character and their quirks is an understatement.
To the end of your amazing hard work and more to come.
The way I stared at this for a long minute now… I just posted the last drabble for this story and I am : not okay. I am also : very happy about how you guys are feeling over it. Thank you, Carrot <3
—Summary: Bucky lost the love of his life before Thanos snapped his finger. The only issue with the whole ‘moving on’ thing is: there is someone else who can bring her back. There’s somewhere he can go back to being happy in this world, and he isn’t above asking the Scarlet Witch for a place in it.
—Word count: 3.6k
—Warning(s): Mentions of death, violence, unhealthy coping mechanisms (don’t ask to live under a spell just to get your love back, folks), depression, mentions of suicide.
—A/n: Requested by this nonnie, who clearly was on crack and wanted to feel something. This is sad. You’ve been warned :D You can consider supporting me on Ko-Fi, as well.If you enjoy it, feedback is appreciated & highly encouraged and motivates me to write even more.
For weeks, all Bucky could think about was the point in all of this ‘being alive’ ordeal, if the world itself was such a bleak and dark place to be in. Without being asked, the universe forced upon us existence and threw us in a giant rock where crazy things happened, people were no longer good to each other and to pop the cherry on the cake, crazy old beings from other planets decided to play god.
Bucky was tired.
Hehad been tired for years, and that ended when he met you at the V.A., but then Thanos happened and for the second time he came back to himself, he was alone and tired.
Above all, Bucky felt anger. And competing for the first place, in the layer right under anger, was the sea of grief he’d bottled up into a vial.
All the grief, and all the missing he did daily because of you.
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
It might be easy to get lost in how fast life goes and things change, but stopping to appreciate the partner he was gifted in life is a good reason to smile from ear to ear. One of the top three, he’d say.
I love this line so much ❤️
“Where’s mom?”
I LOVE THAT HE CALLS HER MOM
Peter still ducks his head for Y/n to kiss the top of it, almost like a blessing.
Also this is adorable god I love that kid
I love that my goal was to make everyone fall in love with Peter Benjamin Barnes and I’ve achieved it.
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
—Summary: Unpredictable, unfair and unreasonable—so far in, that’s all Bucky’s known life to be. With the exception of his son, nothing has ever inspired consistency or proven to be worthwhile enough for him to fight daily to keep. Going back to University while being a single parent has more than one rough edge. He feels lost, out of place, with a constant itch under his skin.
Then, you arrive like a Comet, daring him to change all his skeptic perceptions.
—Word count: 5.1k
—Warning(s): This work is intended for 18+ audiences. Minors, DNI. Explicit depictions of sex. I do not allow for my work to be copied, translated, or reuploaded on any other platform.
There was no point in denying Bucky loved the flair.
Champagne towers, floor-length silky dresses and men dressed to impress for a change, every corridor lit with the best light possible and, to make matters perfect, enough booze to have even the stiffest co-worker laughing and sharing giggles.
Being at this job for only a few months, Bucky still feels out of place though. Which is why he sticks to sipping his drink in a corner until someone comes to him and engages in conversation. Usually the first thing out of their mouths is something related to Steve—while he’s new at the Museum, Steve’s not and if the people who knew Bucky before he arrived are any indicator, he spoke quite a lot about him.
It’s at the party he discovers there’s a second favorite question he enjoys hearing, other than ‘Ah, so you’re the Barnes lad that Rogers keeps talking about?’ and that is:
god, they’re precious. And so domestic, which is somehow even sexier! Beautiful work love. ❤️
I gotta butter you all up as much as I can with the domestic and the loving after all that I planned for the next series. Heh. I’m glad you liked it babes <3
—Summary: Shield was built as a joint effort between Bucky and his closest friends. He and Steve, in particular, had their reasons to want a quiet life, surrounded by comfort and the company of loved ones. Even though Bucky considers himself a successful person, his friends have pressingconcerns—he’slonely, they say. Closed off. Bucky’s always hated this peer pressure to find ‘the one’, but thankfully, he now has you to talk about all these things.
He couldn’t be happier about it. Talking to you about everything is a win in his eyes.
—Word count: 11.1k
—A/n: This is the commission I got for my lovely and dears, RachelandMalin.As always, I hope from the bottom of my heart they enjoy it. Happy reading, my loves.
—Warning(s):This work contains (18+) mature content. Minors, DNI. Explicit descriptions of sex; fingering, penetration, choking, dirty talk, praising, rough-handling.
That’s the word they usually go for: private. Sometimes, usually when Natasha’s the one doing the drunk ramblings at the table, they’ll call him cavemen. During his years in Health and PE College, Sam took to calling him Winter Soldier around the gym after he caught Bucky taking his ten minutes inside the ice tub.
It caught on—Steve did a cute little routine drunk off his ass about 'the winter soldier’ and all his friends recorded it, shared it, Bucky included. The nickname still flies around Shield whenever Sam’s trying to be funny or Wanda wants to tease.
All the teasing that happens at Shield, his co-owned gym with Steve and Sam, is made out of love.
It’s why Bucky knows his friends are only teasing when they call him a lonely wolf, a winter soldier, a privateguy.
At the same time, he sees it. The underneath layer of worry, at times, and the attempts to set him in dates that fail each time. Bucky accepts those because worry and concern are far better than uninterested friends.
It’s just not easyto capture and maintain Bucky’s attention. Or, at least, it used to be.
You seem to have no issue in grasping his focus between your capable hands, and once it’s there, it goes nowhere.
In a timely fashion and without any further ado: here’s the feedback for the April stories.
Below the cut you will find: a run-down of the bonus restriction points, individual feedback for the stories from the voters and a link to a sheet containing detailed reviews of every April submission, courtesy of our Monthlies Reviewing Club.
BONUS RESTRICTIONS
Points were being awarded for completing three different criteria: including in-universe writing as the story title, mentioning a bath (or bath-time activity) and including ’<pronoun> wait for <pronoun>’ in Elsa or Anna’s dialogue. Each restriction was worth one bonus favorite point for upto three extra points.
Stories awarded 3 extra points: My Heart’s Sitting on Go; Sunday Coffee and Cocoa; git stash chocolate; Vicious Creatures; The Angel On Her Shoulder; warming up cold bricks; Fire Coral; Cruel Summer; To Build a Home; Sun rings; You didn’t wait!; Literally; Winterbird; Linger; Terrible Things; Bright Green; Ground Beneath My Feet; 9A1F; The Ninth Wave; Pilgrims On A Long Journey; Brazen; I, Anna
Stories awarded 2 extra points: Ripples; Where is Home?; A series of complicated problems; 127.0.0.1
Stories awarded 1 extra point: IDK You Yet
The extra points have already been included on the results graph.
FEEDBACK AND REVIEWS
This month’s roster of 8 reviewers included: Antor2001, Jadeykins23, the-silliest-moon,@dont-tell-them-its-me, boubotte, @adoraslastbraincell, RationalToad, Yohixah, help-im-so-gay, onepenitentmore and@ice-bjorn.
The reviews can be read here. The nicknames listed above and on the sheet might not be the same, but the people are in the same order.
Individual stories feedback from the voters:
f = favorite vote, k = kudos vote
1: Ripples Style 1 (1k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 2 (1f 1k) Tone 2 (1f 1k) Flow 1 (1f) Plot 2 (1f 1k) Setting/Universe 3 (2f 1k)
2: My Heart’s Sitting on Go Style 2 (1f 1k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 6 (2f 4k) Dialogues 7 (3f 4k) Tone 1 (1k) Flow 2 (1f 1k) Plot 6 (3f 3k) The story’s Elsa 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 1 (1k)
3: Sunday Coffee and Cocoa Style 2 (2k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 1 (1f) Dialogues 2 (1f 1k) Tone 3 (1f 2k) Flow 3 (1f 2k) Plot 1 (1f) Setting/Universe 4 (3f 1k)
4: git stash chocolate Style 3 (3f) Characterisation 3 (3f) Tone 2 (2f) Flow 3 (3f) Plot 3 (2f 1k) Grammar 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 5 (3f 2k) The story’s Anna 2 (1f 1k) Setting/Universe 2 (2f) Other (1f): - very inventive
5: Where is Home? Style 3 (2f 1k) Characterisation 4 (2f 2k) Dialogues 1 (1f) Tone 5 (2f 3k) Flow 2 (2f) Plot 3 (2f 1k) Grammar 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 3 (1f 2k) Setting/Universe 5 (3f 2k) Total other: 2 Other (1f): - Very cute and simple story. It was pleasant to read. Other (1k): - While Anna is largely absent (understandably), I enjoyed this insight into an immortal Elsa’s mind.
6: A series of complicated problems Style 3 (3f) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 7 (3f 4k) Dialogues 6 (3f 3k) Tone 5 (3f 2k) Flow 4 (2f 2k) Plot 8 (3f 5k) Grammar 2 (1f 1k) The story’s Elsa 3 (2f 1k) The story’s Anna 3 (2f 1k) Total other: 3 Other (1f): - Gayduna Other (2k): - Why not, this is a scenario I’ve always thunk in my head and I’m happy someone finally wrote it. - it’s fresh and original
8: The Angel On Her Shoulder Style 9 (6f 3k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 6 (5f 1k) Dialogues 3 (3f) Tone 5 (3f 2k) Flow 8 (6f 2k) Plot 9 (7f 2k) Grammar 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 1 (1f) The story’s Anna 1 (1f) Setting/Universe 4 (3f 1k) Other (4f): - The story is well-structured, and while the twist is not something surprising it is delivered in a satisfying manner. - the twist - Hoo boy. That was a wild rild. I loved this story, it’s verh intriguing and i definitely didn’t expect that twist towards the end. The author did a good job in capturing Elsa’s grief. - Omg. This is good!!
9: warming up cold bricks Style 2 (1f 1k) Tone 3 (2f 1k) Flow 2 (1f 1k) Plot 3 (2f 1k) Setting/Universe 2 (1f 1k) Other (1k): - Very interesting premise and not one that I see often in this fandom.
13: To Build a Home Style 14 (8f 6k) Fits the prompt best 17 (12f 5k) Characterisation 13 (8f 5k) Dialogues 11 (8f 3k) Tone 13 (9f 4k) Flow 11 (6f 5k) Plot 21 (11f 10k) Grammar 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 3 (3f) The story’s Anna 5 (4f 1k) Setting/Universe 2 (2f) Other (4f): - Mature writing, pacing and flow are very well done. - The way the story unfolds and gradually works in the events of the past to show why they are so strange with each other in the present… it’s just beautiful. - Top tier angst/feels. Nailed the prompt. Liked the parallels between fixing the home and fixing their relationship. - One of the most natural depictions of their relationship this month. The story also follows a neat structure of events that unravel the past through present in a non-immersion-breaking way.
14: Sun rings Plot 2 (2k) The story’s Elsa 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 4 (1f 3k)
15: You didn’t wait! Style 4 (2f 2k) Characterisation 2 (1f 1k) Dialogues 3 (1f 2k) Tone 4 (2f 2k) Flow 3 (1f 2k) Plot 1 (1k) Grammar 2 (1f 1k) Other (2f): - I know that other more serious stories probably deserve my votes more, you know? But like crack fics just have a special place in my heart. - it was funny
16: Literally Style 6 (6f) Fits the prompt best 2 (2f) Characterisation 2 (2f) Dialogues 2 (2f) Tone 6 (6f) Flow 5 (5f) Plot 6 (6f) Grammar 4 (4f) The story’s Anna 1 (1f) Setting/Universe 3 (3f) Other (3f): - it’s funny and clever! - It leaves you with something to think about. - I love that plottwist, this felt like a serious crack fic with a punch.
17: 127.0.0.1 Style 4 (3f 1k) Fits the prompt best 2 (2f) Characterisation 2 (2f) Dialogues 4 (2f 2k) Tone 6 (4f 2k) Flow 2 (2f) Plot 4 (4f) Grammar 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 2 (2f) The story’s Anna 2 (2f) Setting/Universe 1 (1f) Other (2f): - Quality over quantity, creative and original take on the prompt. - A really cute little story, read it multiple times and every time it made me smile genuinely. It is almost like a real day of their life.
18: Winterbird Style 4 (2f 2k) Characterisation 2 (2f) Dialogues 1 (1k) Tone 3 (1f 2k) Flow 2 (2f) Plot 10 (4f 6k) The story’s Elsa 4 (2f 2k) The story’s Anna 2 (1f 1k) Setting/Universe 3 (2f 1k) Other (1k): - I enjoyed the feels and the portrayal of their relationship. I liked the unexpected include of magic.
19: Linger Style 6 (5f 1k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 1 (1k) Dialogues 1 (1f) Tone 8 (6f 2k) Flow 6 (4f 2k) Plot 2 (1f 1k) Grammar 2 (2f) The story’s Elsa 2 (2f)
20: Terrible Things Style 9 (4f 5k) Fits the prompt best 7 (4f 3k) Characterisation 9 (6f 3k) Dialogues 7 (1f 6k) Tone 8 (3f 5k) Flow 5 (2f 3k) Plot 11 (6f 5k) Grammar 3 (1f 2k) The story’s Elsa 7 (5f 2k) The story’s Anna 9 (5f 4k) Setting/Universe 3 (3k) Total other: 2 Other (1f): - really well written Other (1k): - The story is has too much angst, I love it.
21: Bright Green Style 1 (1k) Characterisation 1 (1k) Dialogues 1 (1k) Plot 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 4 (1f 3k)
22: Ground Beneath My Feet Style 6 (5f 1k) Fits the prompt best 3 (3f) Characterisation 5 (4f 1k) Dialogues 6 (6f) Tone 3 (3f) Flow 3 (3f) Plot 11 (6f 5k) Grammar 3 (2f 1k) The story’s Elsa 5 (4f 1k) The story’s Anna 3 (3f) Setting/Universe 12 (8f 4k) Other (1f): - Loved the setting and universe. I enjoyed the novelty of seeing them fall in love separated by so much distance.
23: 9A1F Plot 1 (1f)
24: The Ninth Wave Style 2 (1f 1k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 1 (1f) Tone 2 (1f 1k) Flow 2 (1f 1k) Plot 3 (1f 2k) Grammar 1 (1f) Setting/Universe 1 (1k)
25: Pilgrims On A Long Journey Style 2 (2f) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 3 (3f) Tone 2 (2f) Flow 1 (1f) Plot 4 (2f 2k) The story’s Elsa 1 (1f) The story’s Anna 1 (1f)
26: Brazen Style 8 (1f 7k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1k) Characterisation 6 (1f 5k) Dialogues 2 (2k) Tone 5 (5k) Flow 6 (6k) Plot 6 (1f 5k) Grammar 1 (1k) The story’s Elsa 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 4 (4k) Setting/Universe 6 (1f 5k) Other (1k): - First person Kristoff is fun. You really feel for the plight of these girls. The unclear ‘resolution’ makes my heart ache.
27: I, Anna Style 1 (1k) Plot 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 1 (1k)
After ridiculously bad technical difficulties (the mod responsible for taking care of this moved and had no/very poor access to the internet for quite a while, sorry!) we are finally able to present to you the feedback for the February stories.
Below the cut you will find: a run-down of the bonus restriction points, individual feedback for the stories from the voters and a link to a sheet containing detailed reviews of every February submission, courtesy of our Monthlies Reviewing Club.
BONUS RESTRICTIONS
Points were being awarded for completing three different criteria: using a song title or lyrics as the story title, mentioning a mountain view and including the words ‘forever’ and ‘never’ in one person’s dialogue. Each restriction was worth one bonus favorite point for up to three extra points.
Stories awarded 3 extra points: Have you ever, Your Heart Will Fly on Wings, Sleeping in the cold below, Grave Digger, Circles, Learn to be Lonely, La Petite Mort, Never Take a Chance on Me, Nothing Else Matters., The Ocean, This is how it works, Holy Mountains, Welcome to New York
Stories awarded 2 extra points: Lyfjaberg
Stories awarded 1 extra point: obfuscated., Kvitravn
The extra points have already been included on the results graph.
FEEDBACK AND REVIEWS
This month’s roster of 8 reviewers included: Machine, Jadeykins23, the-silliest-moon,Antor2001, KnightSolaire @dont-tell-them-its-meand @the-magic-one-is-you.
The reviews can be read here. The nicknames listed above and on the sheet might not be the same, but the people are in the same order.
Individual stories feedback from the voters:
f = favorite vote, k = kudos vote
1: Have you ever Style 7 (2f 5k) Fits the prompt best 2 (2f) Characterisation 1 (1k) Dialogues 4 (1f 3k) Tone 3 (2f 1k) I like the flow of the story 4 (2f 2k) Plot 3 (1f 2k) Grammar 1 (1k) The story’s Elsa 3 (3k) The story’s Anna 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 4 (2f 2k) Other (1f): - wow this was a haunting beautiful story
2: Your Heart Will Fly on Wings Style 4 (4k) Characterisation 2 (2k) Dialogues 3 (3k) Tone 1 (1f) I like the flow of the story 3 (1f 2k) Plot 4 (1f 3k) The story’s Elsa 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 2 (2k) Setting/Universe 5 (5k) Other (1k): - really liked the writing style
3: obfuscated. Style 4 (4k) Characterisation 1 (1k) Tone 2 (2k) I like the flow of the story 1 (1k) Plot 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 1 (1k) Other (2k): - love me some psychological horror, and the vibes here are immaculate. fic was unsettling right off the bat; the portrayal of elsa’s mental state, especially her disintegrating memories of anna, were so so good. the let it go lyrics at the end made me swear out loud. - The twist
4: Sleeping in the cold below Style 3 (2f 1k) Fits the prompt best 2 (2f) Characterisation 2 (2f) Dialogues 2 (2f) Tone 2 (2f) I like the flow of the story 2 (2f) Plot 2 (2f) Grammar 2 (2f) The story’s Elsa 3 (2f 1k) The story’s Anna 2 (1f 1k) Setting/Universe 4 (2f 2k) Other (2f): - I like the story, it has a great I like the flow of the story of the plot from mystery to how the characters interact with each other - I love the worldbuilding for this.
5: Grave Digger Style 4 (3f 1k) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 4 (4f) Dialogues 3 (3f) Tone 1 (1f) I like the flow of the story 2 (2f) Plot 4 (2f 2k) Grammar 1 (1f) The story’s Elsa 2 (2f) Setting/Universe 6 (4f 2k)
6: Circles Style 15 (5f 10k) Fits the prompt best 6 (4f 2k) Characterisation 19 (9f 10k) Dialogues 16 (8f 8k) Tone 13 (6f 7k) I like the flow of the story 10 (4f 6k) Plot 24 (10f 14k) Grammar 3 (3f) The story’s Elsa 8 (2f 6k) The story’s Anna 15 (8f 7k) Setting/Universe 10 (5f 5k) Total other: 3 Other (1f): - The story hit close to home Other (2k): - I personally related to Anna’s situations in this story and it made me feel things. - great integration of both the surface lyrics and meaning of the song into the fic. extremely detailed setting and chars. lovely scene breaks. very well written!
7: Learn to be Lonely Style 16 (7f 9k) Fits the prompt best 6 (5f 1k) Characterisation 12 (5f 7k) Dialogues 8 (5f 3k) Tone 8 (5f 3k) I like the flow of the story 8 (4f 4k) Plot 10 (6f 4k) Grammar 3 (3f) The story’s Elsa 7 (5f 2k) The story’s Anna 10 (6f 4k) Setting/Universe 6 (1f 5k) Total other: 3 Other (1f): - Just a wonderful story! Other (2k): - Anna was well written - The Premise really carried this one and that’s okay I love it.
8: La Petite Mort Style 3 (1f 2k) Characterisation 4 (1f 3k) Dialogues 3 (1f 2k) Tone 2 (1f 1k) I like the flow of the story 4 (4k) Plot 6 (1f 5k) Grammar 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 3 (1f 2k) Other (1f): - just send me to horny jail i guess
9: Never Take a Chance on Me Style 6 (5f 1k) Fits the prompt best 3 (2f 1k) Characterisation 10 (6f 4k) Dialogues 7 (3f 4k) Tone 4 (1f 3k) I like the flow of the story 5 (3f 2k) Plot 10 (7f 3k) The story’s Elsa 4 (2f 2k) The story’s Anna 3 (2f 1k) Setting/Universe 3 (1f 2k) Total other: 2 Other (1f): - Hans was believable, cute fake dating Other (1k): - Hayle Kyoko is gay as fuck, I love her songs
10: Nothing else matters. Style 2 (2f) Fits the prompt best 1 (1f) Characterisation 3 (3f) Dialogues 2 (2f) Tone 2 (1f 1k) I like the flow of the story 3 (2f 1k) Plot 2 (2k) The story’s Elsa 2 (2f) The story’s Anna 3 (3f) Setting/Universe 2 (1f 1k)
11: The Ocean Style 19 (8f 11k) Fits the prompt best 10 (5f 5k) Characterisation 15 (7f 8k) Dialogues 12 (4f 8k) Tone 15 (6f 9k) I like the flow of the story 13 (7f 6k) Plot 15 (8f 7k) Grammar 6 (2f 4k) The story’s Elsa 13 (5f 8k) The story’s Anna 14 (6f 8k) Setting/Universe 13 (6f 7k) Total other: 3 Other (1f): - i like hurt/comfort and i cannot lie. GREAT use of ‘never’, and other prompts. interesting setting and char backgrounds. effortless exposition. Other (2k): - It had a good I like the flow of the story and pattern of events. Elsa is a little bit OOC but I think it fits better with the settings. - This was honesty really good.
12: Lyfjaberg Style 1 (1k) Tone 1 (1k) I like the flow of the story 1 (1k) Plot 1 (1k) The story’s Elsa 2 (2k) Setting/Universe 4 (4k)
13: This is how it works Style 5 (1f 4k) Characterisation 3 (1f 2k) Dialogues 8 (1f 7k) Tone 7 (1f 6k) I like the flow of the story 3 (1f 2k) Plot 3 (3k) The story’s Elsa 3 (1f 2k) The story’s Anna 4 (1f 3k) Setting/Universe 2 (1f 1k) Other (1k): - I have never seen a story like this, I really like this style!
14: Holy Mountains Style 3 (3k) Characterisation 2 (2k) Dialogues 1 (1k) Tone 3 (3k) I like the flow of the story 2 (2k) Plot 2 (2k) Grammar 1 (1k) The story’s Elsa 1 (1k) The story’s Anna 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 2 (2k) Other (1k): - It read like an old tale, which I adored.
15: Welcome to New York Style 4 (2f 2k) Characterisation 2 (1f 1k) Dialogues 4 (2f 2k) Tone 1 (1k) Plot 4 (1f 3k) The story’s Elsa 3 (1f 2k) The story’s Anna 2 (1f 1k) Setting/Universe 2 (1f 1k) Other (1k): - A nice fluff story
16: Kvitravn Style 1 (1k) Tone 1 (1k) I like the flow of the story 1 (1k) Setting/Universe 2 (2k)
Mira Grant has finally reached the place where she can do what she wants.
Of all of her novels and novellas so far, Feedback is revolutionary in placing feminist and queer philosophies at its centre. The central cast comprises of an Irish lesbian, an Asian-American queer woman, a genderfluid person, and an African-American man. There isn’t a single straight white guy among them.
How do you deal with hecklers? Do you ignore them, do you take their advice?
Brandon Sanderson: So, it depends. Hecklers, I ignore. Criticism, I don’t. I am lucky in that I have a team, and I, these days, have my team watch. Like, “You read the one-star reviews. Tell me if there are things popping up that I need to pay attention to,” and things like that.
Reading one-star reviews is generally a bad experience, but reading three-star reviews is usually a really handy experience for you to do. That’s what you’re looking for, those three-stars, the people that could have loved the book– and if you give it three stars, you liked it, but there were things that bugged you.
And if you start seeing themes like that pop up, try to address them.
But also understand that art is about taste. Every type of art. And you are going to write things that are the right piece of art, but that somebody doesn’t like. Just like some people don’t like my favorite food. Some people hate it. I like mac and cheese, other people hate it. I have a friend who hates ice cream. I’m like, “What? Who hates ice cream?” But he hates ice cream. It’s okay.
So, learn to separate taste from things that are actually skill level problems. And as you’re a new writer, in particular, focusing on craft, just practicing, is more important than the feedback, often, on your first few books. ‘Cause you’ll know. You’ll figure it out. Your first couple books, you’ll be like, “They don’t have to tell me; I know what parts are not working.” But you can’t get better at that until you write them.
SYNOPSIS. Best friends since childhood just don’t become lovers overnight. Sometimes, there are speed bumps along the way. One is that you are secretly in love with Jeno who is smitten with someone else, more specifically, your pretty roommate. And the other is that he asked you to be his fake girlfriend in order to gain your roommate’s attention. No other sane person would say yes to a situation like this but then again, you weren’t sane, to begin with. In situations like this, you wonder how much of a fool you were with going through this plan. In situations like this, Lee Jeno thinks it’s quite nice to have a friend like you.
heartbreak prince | you are in love | cruel summer | how you get the girl
You’re halfway through your first semester of college and you are stillnot a morning person. You have had difficulty waking up in the morning since you were a kid; because you weren’t living at home anymore, Lee Jeno had the honor of being your daily wake-up call. It should’ve been your sweet roommate’s job but Choi Ara’s voice wasn’t enough to keep your eyes open. Jeno, on the other hand, could make his voice boom throughout the room if he wanted to. Being someone who was at your side since you were eight, he had done it many times before in the past. You could recall the countless times he did it during the weekends while growing up, his voice ringing in your ear as he shoved you off the bed.
Now, it’s a little different. One word out of his mouth—whether soft or loud—and your eyelids are fluttering open. Maybe it’s because you’re used to his voice.
oh boy, i feel like i’ll be heart-broken for the next couple parts (but i love feeding myself with angsty fics, so there’s that) ANYWAY, i’m already intrigued by this series. can’t wait!!
[Commissioned by @martyslittleusedblog, based on a quest giver NPC/plot device from the Rayman series of games. Making a dream lord be a big frog who smokes a pipe has to be a drug reference, right? I leaned into it a little here, but also drew connections to D&D’s famous chaotic batrachians, the slaadi.]
Dream Lord, Polokus CR 21 CG Outsider (extraplanar) This creature appears as a vaguely humanoid frog, with long arms, short legs and a pot belly. His skin is a pale cream color, and he has an enormous red beard that hangs down to the ground and seems to move on its own accord. He clutches an umbrella in his hands and a pipe between his teeth.
Polokus The Bubble Dreamer, the Creator CG dream lord of creativity, hedonism and play DomainsChaos, Good, Knowledge, Luck SubdomainsFriendship, Imagination, Thought, Whimsy Worshipersartists,craftsmen, dreamers Minionsbaku,fey creatures, slaadi Holy Symbol a pipe blowing bubbles Favored Weapon heavy mace Obediencespend an hour daydreaming, either while blowing bubbles or while under the effects of a mind-altering substance. Gain a +4 sacred bonus against sleep effects. Boons1:eagle’s splendor 2/day; 2: minor creation 2/day; 3: cloak of dreams 2/day
According to his faithful, Polokus is responsible for creating all of the creatures and characters that appear in the Dimension of Dreams in his own dreams. When he sleeps well, these dream entities are playful and friendly; when he has nightmares they are cruel and unpleasant. Whether this is true or not, Polokus is a force of creation and creativity, and his whims shape the Dimension of Dream and echo into the worlds beyond. Polokus alternates his time in fervent bouts of crafting, playing with other dream entities, or dozing while under the effects of his ever-present pipes.
Polokus dislikes combat, but that doesn’t mean that he is weak. He takes a backseat approach, summoning armies of entropic creatures and dream azatas to fight in melee while he disrupts enemy tactics with hexes and spells. His beard is prehensile—although it cannot wield a weapon, it can be used to deliver touch attacks or even grab and constrict foes. Polokus prefers nonlethal methods, such as putting enemies to sleep or putting them into a telekinetic sphere for safekeeping. Although some of his tactics can incapacitate creatures indefinitely, like endless slumber and microcosm, Polokus will usually release them after a few days or weeks in order to check on their progress and see if they’re willing to reconsider their agenda of violence.
Polokus has an interesting relationship with the slaadi. He is friendly with the slaad lords Rennbuu and Chourst, and seems to like the company of slaadi in general, although he chides their more violent tendencies and tries to steer them towards acts of creation, not destruction. There are some rumors that he has been steering the course of slaad evolution, even rigging the ecological contest that led to the descendants of frogs escaping the Spawning Stone and spreading through the multiverse. Some proteans see Polokus as an interesting variable in their experiments, whereas others view him as a nuisance or even with jealousy.
Polokus’ Perplexing Parasol Price89,192 gp;Auramoderate conjuration and enchantment; CL12th Slotnone;Weight8 lbs. This item is a fully functioning umbrella, but is strong as steel and dangerous in combat. Polokus’ perplexing parasol strikes as a +4 merciful heavy mace, and casts touch of idiocy (CL 12th) on a creature that it strikes with a critical hit. RequirementsCraft Magic Arms and Armor, cure light wounds, touch of idiocy; Price44,596 gp.
Polokus’ Pleasing Pipe Price8,400 gp;Aurafaint transmutation; CL4th Slotnone;Weight10 lbs. Smoking from this hookah produces a variety of minor pleasant effects, as per a polypurpose panacea spell. Up to four individuals may smoke from the hookah simultaneously. The owner of the Polokus’ pleasing pipe can change the effect as a standard action, but all individuals smoking from the same pipe at the same time must gain the same effect, and a creature can only gain one effect at a time from Polokus’ pleasing pipe. RequirementsCraft Wondrous Item, polypurpose panacea;Price4,200 gp.
This is pretty cool! Is “Dream Lord” a pre-existing thing or did you make the category up to be similar to other demigod categories?
Dream Lord as a collection of demigods is my own invention, sort of. It was really @arachcobra‘s idea to give the Dimension of Dreams its own demigods, but my idea to make them between CRs 21 and 25. Similar to this one, they also wanted a character based on a video game! My first Dream Lord was Troupe Lord Grimm from Hollow Knight
