#truth or drink
Good news is – I am finally making progress on “Truth or drink”. It’s approx. 3333 words as of now.
I had a sudden bolt of inspiration and re-worked Isabela’s segment, after being sure I had it covered. The new version fits her character better, so it’s a good thing. Even if it’s extra work.
I am having some trouble arranging dialogue bits in Agustín’s segment. I really want to include dialogue option A, but dialogue option B flows much more naturally. On the other hand, option B pulls the reader away from the highly emotional plot point I consider vital to this chapter. I am now trying to somehow fit option A after option B, but it doesn’t feel right. Then again, real life dialogue is not always natural. So maybe I am overthinking.
Isabela’s prompt is “Share an inspiring story from your life”. Agustín’s is “Something you enjoy doing with your sibling”.
