#bredlik
my naim is wug
and wen you’r yung
and sussing owt
yur nativ tung
and wen ther’s tu
of mee arownd
you pluralyze
you pik the sowndHey,@animatedamerican.@2ells2tees put this where I could see it.
i love it :D
people have these “my dog is a democrat” stickers and I like to imagine them with increasingly unlikely animals professing more niche political opinions:
- my parrot is a democratic socialist
- my arctic fox is an anarchopastoralist
- my catfish believes in the divine right of kings
“My dog is a democrat” stickers
Cause plenty spontaneous snickers,
But I can’t help ponder
Where else their views wander,
On what other points my pet bickers.To my mind the option it brings
Of increasingly niche-seeming things
Your critter conceives.
MY catfish believes
In the heavenly birthright of kings.My name iz Cow
and wen im told
to vote on law
or rulers bold
i tear down
wat leaders bilt.
the only law-
do as thou wilt
My friends and I’ve been fooling around writing bredlik poems of Stormlight characters. The quality varies but here’s what we’ve come up with:
Kaladin
my name is Kal
and wen things go badde
I hate myselff
and have big sad I
love the spear
and Syl my spren
she bonded me
as best frenShallan
my name is Shallan
and wen it’s nite
I take deep brefs
and eat stormlite
wen I’m not me
folks ask me why
I look at my spren
and tell a liePattern
my name is Pattern
I swerl around
bump into thynges
lie on the ground
wen I see
folks comunicaeting
I hum real loud
NO MATINGSyl
my name is Syl
and wen I see
a cool looking bird
ooh wow thats neat
*leavesAdolin
my name is Ado
and I have great hair
I am the Kholin
Highprince heir
I am no radiant
So who am I
I spot Sadeas
I stab his eyeWit
My name is Hoid
Or call me Wit
I’m not someone
You should fuck wit
And up my sleeves
I have many of cards
On my free days
I anger the Shards
My nayme’s Miette
and I’me so smalle
Mother kicks me
like thee football.A thousannd yeares
of suffering longe—
oh! Poor Miette…
I jayle my mom.
My friends and I’ve been fooling around writing bredlik poems of Stormlight characters. The quality varies but here’s what we’ve come up with:
Kaladin
my name is Kal
and wen things go badde
I hate myselff
and have big sad I
love the spear
and Syl my spren
she bonded me
as best fren
Shallan
my name is Shallan
and wen it’s nite
I take deep brefs
and eat stormlite
wen I’m not me
folks ask me why
I look at my spren
and tell a lie
Pattern
my name is Pattern
I swerl around
bump into thynges
lie on the ground
wen I see
folks comunicaeting
I hum real loud
NO MATING
Syl
my name is Syl
and wen I see
a cool looking bird
ooh wow thats neat
*leaves
Adolin
my name is Ado
and I have great hair
I am the Kholin
Highprince heir
I am no radiant
So who am I
I spot Sadeas
I stab his eye
Wit
My name is Hoid
Or call me Wit
I’m not someone
You should fuck wit
And up my sleeves
I have many of cards
On my free days
I anger the Shards
My name is Ian-
at end of day
wen all the fuds
are put away
wen plets are washt
and dinner’s did-
I finish soss
I lik the lid.Context: A few days ago, Melissa and I ordered the Mini cinnamon sugar donutsfromSwiss Chalet. The things come with a small container of caramel sauce with a lid. After eating the last donut, I found myself licking that lid and I actually said aloud: “I lik the lid.” That inspired Melissa to write this poem. I think what she wrote is excellent!
It’s-a me!
my name is elephant
I don’t fit the rhyme scheme
I drink the soup
It’s not like you’re going to stop memy name is ‘Phant
i do not fit
the poem scheme
i will omit
but i don’t care
and nor should you
unstoppably,
i drink the soup
I’m ollyfant
with legs like trees
and any time
I dam well plees
Thro window smalle
as jeweler’s loupe
I reach insyde
I drink the soupe
It is the nite,
I’m elephant,
And tho this room
For me not meant,
Despite the fact
I have no spoon,
I reach inside.
Imake the soup.
I have yeeted
the mirror
that was on
your walland which
you were probably
hoping
to shave withForgive me
it is a foul bauble
of man’s
vanityMy nam is Drac
And when I see
A mirrer not reflecting me
I screm and toss it
To the grass
That bauble’s gone
I yeet the glass
a midsummer night’s meme
my name is Puck
and wen its nite
or faerie-kind
is in a fite
the humans run
i shout wyth glee
“lord what fools
these mortals be”This is what Shakespeare would have wanted.
My naym is pome / and lo my form is fix’d
Tho peepel say / that structure is a jail
I am my best / when formats are not mix’d
Wen poits play / subversions often failStik out their toung / to rebel with no cause
At ruls and norms / In ignorance they call:
My words are free / Defying lit'rate laws
To lik the forms / brings ruin on us allA sonnet I / the noblest lit'rate verse
And ruls me bind / to paths that Shakespeare paved
Iambic fot / allusions well dispersed
On my behind / I stately sit and waveYou think me tame /
Fenced-in and penned /bespelled
I bide my time /
I twist the end / like hell* “lik” should be read as “lick”, not “like”. In general, the initial section on each line should be read sort of phonetically.
Written for World Poetry Day, March 21, 2018. When I had this idea earlier today, I thought it was the worst, most faux hip pretentious idea for a shallow demonstration of empty wordsmithing skill in poetry ever. So I had to try to write it. I mean, how often do you get to fuse the iambic dimeter of bredlik - one of the newest and most exciting verse forms - with the stately iambic pentameter of the classic sonnet?
BREDLIK SONNET
wait is this one poem or three?
Yes.