#progress report
I hope that a year from now I’m still doing italki sessions and enjoying them and making progress and finally starting to feel like I can actually speak Norwegian rather than just understand it.
A year and a half later, I’m still doing italki sessions and enjoying them and making progress and I finally feel like I can actually speak Norwegian rather than just understand it!
And I hope that a year from now I’m still taking Japanese lessons and enjoying them and making progress and starting to actually speak, read, write and understand Japanese instead of just being able to say a few simple sentences and understand the occasional word here and there!
always nice when you stumble across a vocab list you made like a year ago and you look at the words on it like “oh! there was a time i didn’t know these words! but now i do! and i can use them in a conversation!” yay progress!
I know for those who might not have seen my update last week that you’re probably thinking this update is super early! That’s because it’s the Jubilee long Bank Holiday weekend here in the UK, so I wanted to get this out before that short break!
As well as get very happy about the fact Chapter 13’s writing is complete! :D
It still needs editing, but I tend to do better at leaving editing for a bit before doing it. Coming back with fresh eyes to it definitely means I’m more effective, as well as giving my brain time to work on how I want to rewrite certain bits!
But it was also an awesome chapter as I finally got to reveal Nate/Nat’s long awaited [Redacted] endearment for the MC! We got in contact with a really lovely translator, who not only confirmed what I was hoping to use, but she was kind enough to offer other options as well! One of them had me really torn and almost changing my mind, but I ended up sticking with the original as it’s become so much a part of N’s character for me now.
I’m working on some editing on Chapter 8 for SpunkyCat today. So close to sorting out all the mess for that chapter! It’s a real struggle to get through it, but the end is in sight!
So when I get back next Monday, it means I’ll be straight onto Chapter 14! Aahhh!!
Chapter 14 is a big one again. It’s pretty much 4/5 different versions of it because it is the ‘date’ chapter with each love interest…Been looking forward to writing these scenes for a very loooongtime!
Social media days will also be the week I get back, but I have gone ahead and scheduled in some of the Character Q&A asks for Patreon for the weekdays.
I hope you all have the most fantastic time! We’ll be offline, so I’ll update you all again on the Friday I get back! <3
*pterodactyl screaming* Aahhhh! I wrote a scene this week that I was SO proud of and got me SO pumped like you wouldn’t believe!
It wasn’t even the original plan for the scene, hehe! :D
I realised that the scene I had just didn’t have enough emotional punch to it for the LI split scenes afterwards (where there’s a lot of aftermath emotion happening) to make sense.
It was all right, but it just wasn’t…enough. And you know me and my angst, hehe!
But at about 3am one morning (which is when a lot of my best ideas form. Who needs sleep, right? :D) I thought of the most AMAZINGLY painful scene that would work.
And it did!
I was so excited by it that I had to share it with someone, so I made Nai read it even though it was completely out of context for her, and she had no idea what was happening, lol!
Not only does it have the weight to it that I needed, but it also shows a character off in a slightly different light—especially because that light can change again depending on your relationship and reactions with them!
Phew! So yeah, I was very pumped this week!
Chapter 13 is coming together sooooo smoothly. Not only am I already at the split scenes, but I’ve finished one and am almost finished with another! I’ll definitely get that scene done by tomorrow, and possibly another started, which means it’s possible I might be able to finish Chapter 13 next week!!!!
Next week, I do have to take some time for sorting more of Chapter 8 for SpunkyCat, as well as starting on the Character Q&A questions for Patreon!
I had SO many awesome asks for the Character Q&A that I will definitely be doing one a day throughout the whole of June! Thank you so much to everyone who sent those in! I won’t be able to answer them all, but I will put any I don’t get to in a file ready for next time!
It’s the long Jubilee Bank Holiday weekend at the end of next week in the UK, so it’s a three-day week. But I’m really determined to get so much done in those days! It would be amazing to go into that break knowing I could come back to writing Chapter 14!!!
Hope you all have the most fantastic weekend! We’ll be offline as usual, so I’ll update you all again at the earlier day of Wednesday! <3
I smashed Chapter 12 in the end! :D
I thought I was going to be finishing it off at the beginning of this week, but instead I blasted through it last Saturday and got it done!!
Which meant on Monday I could do editing, and on Tuesday I started Chapter 13!!!And then, I’ve been hammering through Chapter 13 too!!
Yeah, it’s been a seriously good week, hehe!
Though I do have to give a HUGE thank you to DashingDon for being a massive help when I had trouble this week with the edit version. They were straight on it and got it fixed so fast after I’d been struggling for soooo long.
They really provide such an amazing site for choicescript creators! Definitely deserves all the support we can give! <3
But after finishing fighting with that and getting some Chapter 8 edits up ready for SpunkyCat to look over, I did move onto Chapter 13. I should have done more editing really…but I was way too excited to get onto 13, especially as I knew what was coming up and have been itching to write it for a very long time!!
Is there some angst in 13?…Oh yeah.
Do we got a little peak at what a heartbroken love interest could look like in 13?…Oh yes we do.
Chapter 13 is also a much more straightforward chapter without any split scenes until the end third section, so I’ve been managing to blast through it. It feels soooo good to make such major progress.
The branches and variations are what I want Wayhaven to be about, but it is nice to have a chapter where it’s just the MC and one other character. And this scene certainly brings a lot of tension to the mix because of it just being the two!
Next week, I’ll be continuing on with Chapter 13, though may have to take an afternoon or two for more editing depending on how SpunkyCat gets on. She’s a lot quicker at editing than I am!
Hope you all have the most wonderful weekend! We’ll be offline as usual, so I’ll update you all again next Friday! <3
Ohhh! So much to tell you this week! :D
Ok, so I know you guys are probably sick of me talking about the retreat by now, but it was SO amazing! I learnt an absolute ton, and it was so awesome to have someone explain it to you right there.
Reading writing advice in a book or online is fantastic, but it really does make a difference when you can have someone there explaining how you could adapt that into your own style of writing!
We did a class on character introductions, which was very timely as I was writing that at the time. But one piece of advice—about how your reader is more likely to remember a side character if they have at least a paragraph of interaction with them—made me rethink how I was writing it. So I went back this week and redid that, and now I LOVE it!
Not only will it help with that, but I got the chance to show a bit more of these new characters’ personalities in those moments because of that extended interaction (each of them got a choice set for the MC to choose from on how to introduce themself).
But one of the biggest things I had fun with there was one task we had where we had to do reversals. We had to take our love interest (I had to pick one) and take our antagonist (again, I had to pick just one, lol!) and flip them.
The love interest became the baddy, and the antagonist became the love interest.
It was…very interesting! Especially as I have been writing the characters for over half of my life, and these good guys have always been good guys, hehe!
I chose Adam/Ava, and I turned their past and their ‘trying to always choose the logical choice’ as their main traits to twist.
For the antagonist…well, that would be spoilery, hehe! I chose a baddy who is a bigger player later in the series.
But oh my word! We all remarked how disturbingly easy it was was to flip the traits around and make them baddies! But the class leader was saying that was kind of the point. Characters should always have that balance to them. If it was difficult to flip them, then you’ve made them unbalanced, and it’s a great way of seeing how to fix that.
I got Nai to read it, and I was seriously thrilled at how surprised she was that Adam/Ava still read like Adam/Ava. She was expecting them to be all baddy, but they were still them just scarily the baddy. If that makes sense? :D
And with it being social media days this week, I typed up that scenario (minus a few super spoilery bits!) and have that scheduled as the Monthly Bonus Content #2 for you guys on Patreon later this month.
Hope you enjoy Adam/Ava in all their villainous glory, hehe! :D
But yeah, I was super keen to get back to writing with all this new info in my head! So after social media days, I was back into like you wouldn’t believe! I’m actually going to finish two of the three split scene sections for this chapter by tomorrow!
Which means I might just be able to finish Chapter 12 next week!!!
Phew! That was a lot of blabbering in the update this week :D I’m just still buzzing about the retreat and how well I’ve done this week!
Hope you all have the most amazing weekend! We’ll be offline as usual, so I’ll update you all again next week! <3
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That’s it, isn’t it? Wil’s guitar. The final, missing piece to his ironic, unfinished symphony. His personal memorial. Tommy pictures it now: leather strap slung over his shoulder, hands hovering over well-worn wood. Not quite touching– Wilbur never had gotten around to teaching him– but reverent fingers tracing the strings, fluttering over the fret. Tapping out the off-beat rhythm of a song Wilbur had sung, back when loneliness grew over their home with the tenacity of jungle vines.
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