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I may or may not be one that likes to make a good plot twist But all hell breaks loose if it happens in a book I’m reading

How about you guys?

https://www.instagram.com/joselintoftlund/

Some time back I bought these books due to someone saying they reminded them of my story the truth about hell ( which I’m working on )

When I’m done with the one I read I can’t wait to start on these

I’m bored as hell with a writer block so what should I watch? Any ideas?

Reading has always been my escape. I was a late bloomer when it came to reading, but I will never forget when I read my first book alone (jagten på det hellige barn ) and I was just mesmerized over the fact a person could write a whole universe just by using their imagination.

And from that day, I decided I wanted to do it too, and that’s now over 11 years ago. I began my first English book in the #hiddentruthsseries many many years after, but thanks to that book I found not only out I loved reading, but writing as well.

Hello everyone, my name is Joselin! The hopefully soon to be author of #hiddentruthsseries I am 22 y

Hello everyone, my name is Joselin! The hopefully soon to be author of #hiddentruthsseries I am 22 years old and from Denmark, and am mostly self-taught in English. I love to write and read, and believe it or not I have at least 200 books I gathered over the years, and slowly building my English library too. Wanting to write is something I have wanted to since I was around 9 years old and read my very first book on my own( I was a slow learner ) and I just got obsessed with the fact that people could make these beautiful worlds, and I wondered if I had the ability to do it too. I have been working on this story since 2016, when I for fun decided to put a snippet of my first English book out on a website. A friend had dared me to try and write in English And oh boy, did I not only gain some amazing friends due to it but the courage to believe I could write and now I am here! Hopefully next year I am finishing self-editing, and have the courage for the next steps. I got lucky enough to meet a super talented cover maker @jen_munswami and is slowly but steady writing my way to publishing. 



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Writing my first book has been anything but easy. And I still got a lot to learn, but #hiddentruthsseries has truly been a draining and wonderful experience. Being my first English book I know it won’t be perfect when I finally get it edited and send to editor and the likes. But it’s been in the works for years now and I still love the characters as much as the first time I wrote it. ⠀

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⁣His breath tickled her ear as he leaned down and whispered

“Is it hard looking at me like this?” ⠀

Wide eyed she took a deep breath through her nose, knowing he did it on purpose. He wanted to see her reaction. Usually he would be the first to flee when he wanted to hide something; especially stuff like this. Normally he wouldn’t want her to see him like this, fearing Sara would become scared of him.⠀

She turned around focusing on his golden eyes. Eyes she had known since she was little that always shinned of warmth, eyes that now looked at her with worry. ⠀

His twitching wings were folded tightly behind him. ⠀

Smiling she wiped the blood away from his chin with her sleeve, hoping Lucifer didn’t see her other trembling hand. He would never forget her reaction if he did. She just had to remember who he was, he was Lucifer, herLucifer.⠀

“I’m not scared of you Lucifer, okay maybe a little when you look like this, but not of you.” she gave him a soft smile. She wasn’t stupid, she knew Lucifer did some bad things, it was after all part of the job description as the ruler of Hell. “I could never be scared of you.” Sara knew she can’t show him how shocked she is, so she kept on smiling, cause deep down she knew she wasn’t lying.⠀

— A snippet from my very first book called It’s still under heavy editing lol⠀

Hi guys, okay new to Tumblr and trying to locate the amazing community of authors and artists I heard so much about in here!

A little about myself.

I’m from Denmark and am writing my first book called “the truth about hell” I am self taught in English so has a long way to go with editing and rewriting but that’s part of writing am I right?

I am also avid reader and love art. I have a whole library at home as my friends call it, due to collecting books since I was a preteen. I also is a huge fan of anime, though in the later years have falled a little off the vagon but wanna try and get back into it! I would love to find others that has some of the same interests as me and it seems like they’re is some amazing ppl in here that have just that! If anyone is interested in fangirling over series like supernatural, Sherlock Holmes and marvel or the likes or even books I am down! Or heck even talk about the book they’re written or have already written!

I can’t draw for shit but found this old sketch of how I think Hells general uniform looks like and it’s the best I ever done.

When your anxiety tells you you just wrote a trash chap and the more you look at it you feel like it’s true gotta remember it’s only a draft or I’m gonna yeet myself out the window after my pc..

How dare you suggest that I do something I actually should be doing?

Tone:

It’s important to establish your writing tone in the first chapter.


A brief definition of this is how you say what you say.


It’s also important to make sure your tone matches up with the genre you’re writing.


▪️Let’s take mystery-thrillerfor instance:

Example:


There was a knock at the door.

Danielle walked down the stairs to answer it.

But when she opened the door, she noticed that no one was there.

That was weird, she thought. 


Vs.


There was a knock at the door.

Danielle crept down the shadowed stairs and the floorboards creaked under her weight, spooking her.

When she made it to the bottom she put her hand on the cold knob and slowly opened the door.

No one was there.

This is scary, she thought.


Often times you can use“adjectives”to set your tones.


Example:

Use these adjectives to set a negative tone


▪️Angry

▪️Annoyed

▪️Hurt

▪️Sad

▪️Anxious

▪️Scary

▪️Sick

▪️Awful

▪️Insane

▪️Bad

▪️Black

▪️Embarrassed

▪️Envious

▪️Lazy

▪️Tense

▪️Blue

▪️Evil

▪️Lonely

▪️Fierce

▪️Mad

▪️Terrifying

▪️Foolish

▪️Mysterious

▪️Timid

▪️Tired

▪️Confused

▪️Frightened

▪️Troubled

▪️Crappy

▪️Nervous

▪️Upset

▪️Crazy

▪️Grieving

▪️Creepy

▪️Grumpy

▪️Weak

▪️Cruel

▪️Outrageous

▪️Weary

Escapism:

1. seeking to escape from reality

2. seeking to escape from reality by form of books

▪️your readers want to escape from the worry and unpleasantness of life.

▪️keep this in mind and you’ll write great stories that your readers won’t be able to put down.

This is especially easy if you add suspenseto your book.

How to create suspense:

▪️start scenes and chapters with urgency

Example:

Molly woke up.

She yawned and stretched and moseyed into the kitchen to make her cereal.

She found her favorite kind (cinnamon toast crunch) and poured it into a bowl with milk.

Now, she sat down in front of the window to watch the morning birds pecking the ground.

Let’s say someone is about to break into Molly’s house and kidnap her. Well… your readers will probably never make it to find out because this scene started out with no promise and no urgency what so ever. It’s just a boring morning routine that no one wants to hear.

Let’s try it another way…

Molly woke up with a strange feeling in her gut.

The house was quiet and she remembered that her parents had left on vacation.

Maybe she was just nervous about being alone. Yeah, that was it.

She started breakfast but the feeling wouldn’t leave her so she decided to lock all the windows and bolt the front door.

But the strange feeling persisted.

Suddenly, she remembered that she had forgotten to lock the basement door.

She sat down her bowl of cereal and slowly headed down the dark stairs…

Synonyms for “Looked”:

▪️Heglanced at the girl.

▪️Shegazed at the horizon, unaware of how much time had passed.

▪️Shespotted him in the crowded airport.

▪️Shepeeked through the curtain, giggling.

▪️He saw a glimpse of the cabin through the trees.

▪️Hewatched her car disappear down the road.

▪️Shesurveyed her child’s arm for any scratches.

▪️Shestudied the words on the page.

▪️Hespied the dog in the bushes.

▪️The girl eyed the boy, crossing her arms.

▪️Shechecked her purse to make sure nothing was missing.

▪️His eyes focused on hers, his heart fluttering.

▪️Heinspected her expression, seeing that she was upset.

▪️Hescanned the church building. It was empty.

▪️Sheogled the cake, licking her lips.

▪️Hepeered up at the balcony, seeing her there.

▪️The child squinted at the ocean against the sunlight.

▪️Heviewed the blood on the carpet.


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Synonyms for “Walk”:

▪️Theystrolled through the garden hand in hand.

▪️Shetramped through the mud, her legs aching.

▪️Hehiked up the hill.

▪️The cat awoke and moseyed to her food bowl.

▪️Heprowled around the corner as the girl neared.

▪️Hemarched around the school yard, feeling proud.

▪️Sheambled into the kitchen with a yawn.

▪️Hewandered through the hallways, staring down at th map.

▪️Shetrodslowlyacross the old bridge, watching her feet.

▪️Heproceeded on his way after stopping for a drink.

▪️The boys trooped into the locker room after a long game.

▪️The boy and girl sauntered down the road.

▪️Sheplodded toward the house, having finished her jog.

▪️Hepatrolled up and down the street.

▪️The dogs roamed the open meadows.

Describing Setting:

Don’t overload:

The bluebird was singing soft melodies and flapping its wings. The breeze was blowing sweet scents from the flowers that were red, blue, and purple. The sky was clear with only a few thin clouds. The tall dark trees were creaking and echoing against the woods. ✖️

Vs.

The rose-scented wind blew breezes against the forest. Bluebirds sprang into the air with songs of summer. ✔️

Writing Better Books:

▪️Use dialogue to move your story along

▪️write tension: your story should be full of struggle. Even after resolving one conflict, quickly introduce the next. This keeps things interesting for your reader.

▪️outline:I personally don’t use this method but everyone has what works for them. At least have a goal in mind and constantly ask the question “what if”.

If you are like me, ask these questions for each scene:

▪️write detail: don’t forget the senses, especially sound, sight, and smell.

▪️read other books and ask yourself why you like that book or what keeps you interested and try to learn from it.

▪️it’s okay to vary chapter length, it keeps things interesting.

▪️write hand gestures

▪️let your characters’ personalities speak through action.

▪️there doesn’t always have to be a moral

▪️delete “very” and be precise:

instead of “very good”say“excellent”.

▪️delay plot twist reveals, allow suspension to build

▪️avoid clichés

These are common clichés:

▪️show don’t tell

▪️captivate your readers from the start: pose a question:

Mary would never walk again. Why?

Peter’s heart was shattered.Why?

The day he came, my life drastically changed. Why? Who?

▪️use similes when appropriate

▪️don’t stress it, you’re doing great ☺️

Clarity:

She went all the way to the store by the way of a car in which she had just purchased. ✖️

Vs.

She went to the store in a car she had just purchased. ✔️


He very much loved the sounds that the cars made as they made their way passed his house at a very fast pace.✖️

Vs.

He loved the cars’ sounds as they quickly passed his house. ✔️

▪️Avoid run on sentences:


He bought a dog from the shelter because he wanted to give a homeless dog a nice new home and that made him feel like a good person. ✖️

Vs.

He bought a dog from the shelter because he wanted to give a homeless dog a nice new home. This made him feel like a good person.

▪️Cut out “was” when possible:

Courtney was smiling. ✖️

Vs.

Courtney smiled. ✔️


▪️Try using one sentace paragraphs:


She liked how the rain felt on her bare skin.

So, she chose to walk home, her feet crashing through puddles.

It took longer than it would have in a car.

But she didn’t regret it.


▪️Try shorter sentences:

Ann’s heart felt sad.

She didn’t know what had caused it.

All she knew was that she woke up one morning feeling sad.

▪️Be conside:

I like carrots. Carrots are better than broccoli.✖️

Vs.

I like carrots better than broccoli. ✔️

▪️Be Specific:

She ate a snack.✖️

Vs.

She ate peanut butter crackers. ✔️


She went out for entertainment.✖️

Vs.

She went to the theater.✔️

▪️Paint pictures:

The sun was yellow. The sky was blue.✖️

Vs.

The sky was a blanket of gold, fluttering through the pale blue. ✔️

▪️Express don’t impress:

Scintillating gold fulgrated across the sphere it was a quintessential evening.✖️

Vs.

Sparkling gold mixed through the navy sky. It was the perfect evening. ✔️

Best Writing Tip EVER:


  • If it’s boring to you, it’s boring to your reader.


Otherbest writing Tips:

▪️Write what you love

▪️throw away guidelines (if you want to write about a character that passes out every five seconds for no reason, GO FOR IT)

▪️stop writing for other people

▪️stop worrying ☺️

▪️fall in love with your story, characters, and setting

▪️allow writing to be fun again

▪️don’t write for money, popularity, or anything other than YOU (you’re not an accountant, you’re a writer! But if money follows your passion, yay you!)

Questions to ask yourself:


If bores me, why am I writing it?

What do I love? Hobbies, places, food, subjects, events, eras, etc.

What do I not love? Don’t write it.

What do I know? Homeschooling, raising animals, career, art, cleaning houses. (You’d be surprised what others don’t know and how interested they would be to just read about a character that mops floors for a living )

Am I writing about a subject I’m unfamiliar with?

Do I love my book?

Does my book excite me?

Do I love my characters?

What books do I like to read?


Testimony:


Once upon a time, a writer that loved to write couldn’t write any more.

She tried everything in her power but ended up hating her book just as much as a runny nose and sore throat.

She wondered why this had happened to her.

She realized she had been writing for others, what she thought they wanted and liked.

But in reality, her stories were boring like watching rain out the window.

Especially to her.

So she decided to take a break from internet writing and wrote a private story for herself.

She quickly realized she had never lost her writing gift and she felt so happy that she finished an entire novel and published it.

Many people loved and commented on her book, telling her it was the best book she had ever written.

Now she realized that her own passions also interested others so she kept writing for herself. And others enjoyed it, too!

Now she writes for a living, it’s not boring, and she has fun everyday.


Theend.

Writing Snacks:

Sitting down to write with a bag of chips or a slice of cake is… well, let’s face it. You’re probably going to eat too much. And yes, I have been very guilty of this.

Here’s an alternative:


▪️sliced veggies + dip

▪️yogurt(non-dairy is my fav)

▪️pretzels

▪️smoothie

▪️your favorite nuts (almonds!!!)

▪️juice

▪️sliced apples with nut butter

▪️dark chocolate

▪️popcorn

▪️dried fruit

▪️seed mixes

▪️hot tea


If your anything like me, you’ll sit down at your laptop for hours at a time working on your story… so it’s good to prepare your snacks in advance, so it’s an easy grab and go option.

How To Write Paragraphs:

To make interesting paragraphs you need an even balance of the following:

▪️Conjunctions:(But, and, etc.)

▪️Short sentences:She went to the store.

▪️Long sentences:She went to the store, hoping she could get the bread she wanted on sale.


Example:

What would happen?Lily had never been left alone before, because she had super bad anxiety. But this time, her mother felt it would be good for her.No. It was the worst mistake.

Vs.


Lily had terrible anxiety and didn’t want to be left alone. But this time her mother felt it would be good for her, so she left to the store. This was a bad idea and a horrible mistake.


Lily had terrible anxiety. She didn’t want to be left alone. Her mother felt it would be good for her. She left to the store. This was a bad idea. This was a horrible mistake.

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