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Now first, I have to say, that the plot you’re able to come up with in one day is not going to be without its flaws, but coming up with it all at once, the entire story unfolds right in front of you and makes you want to keep going with it. So, where to begin?
- What is your premise and basic plot? Pick your plot. I recommend just pulling one from this list. No plots are “original” so making yours interesting and complicated will easily distract from that fact, that and interesting characters. Characters will be something for you to work on another day, because this is plotting day. You’ll want the main plot to be fairly straight forward, because a confusing main plot will doom you if you want subplots.
- Decide who the characters will be. They don’t have to have names at this point. You don’t even need to know who they are other than why they have to be in the story. The more characters there are the more complicated the plot will be. If you intend to have more than one subplot, then you’ll want more characters. Multiple interconnected subplots will give the illusion that the story is very complicated and will give the reader a lot of different things to look at at all times. It also gives you the chance to develop many side characters. The plot I worked out yesterday had 13 characters, all were necessary. Decide their “roles” don’t bother with much else. This seems shallow, but this is plot. Plot is shallow.
- Now, decide what drives each character. Why specifically are they in this story? You can make this up. You don’t even know these characters yet. Just so long as everyone has their own motivations, you’re in the clear.
- What aren’t these characters giving away right off the bat? Give them a secret! It doesn’t have to be something that they are actively lying about or trying to hide, just find something that perhaps ties them into the plot or subplot. This is a moment to dig into subplot. This does not need to be at all connected to their drive to be present in the story. Decide who is in love with who, what did this person do in the 70’s that’s coming back to bite them today, and what continues to haunt what-his-face to this very day. This is where you start to see the characters take shape. Don’t worry much about who they are or what they look like, just focus on what they’re doing to the story.
- What is going to change these characters? Now this will take some thinking. Everyone wants at least a few of the characters to come out changed by the end of the story, so think, how will they be different as a result of the plot/subplot? It might not be plot that changes them, but if you have a lot of characters, a few changes that are worked into the bones of the plot might help you.
- Now list out the major events of the novel with subplot in chronological order. This will be your timeline. Especially list the historical things that you want to exist in backstory. List everything you can think of. Think about where the story is going. At this point, you likely haven’t focused too much on the main plot, yeah, it’s there, but now really focus on the rising actions, how this main plot builds its conflict, then the climactic moment. Make sure you get all of that in there. This might take a few hours.
- Decide where to start writing. This part will take a LOT of thinking. It’s hard! But now that you’ve got the timeline, pick an interesting point to begin at. Something with action. Something relevant. Preferably not at the beginning of your timeline - you want to have huge reveals later on where these important things that happened prior are exposed. This is the point where you think about what information should come out when. This will be a revision of your last list, except instead of being chronological, it exists to build tension.
- Once you’ve gotten the second list done, you’ve got a plot. Does it need work? Probably. But with that said, at this point you probably have no idea who half your characters are. Save that for tomorrow, that too will be a lot of work.
Disclaimer for this post.
Writing Better Books:
▪️Use dialogue to move your story along
▪️write tension: your story should be full of struggle. Even after resolving one conflict, quickly introduce the next. This keeps things interesting for your reader.
▪️outline:I personally don’t use this method but everyone has what works for them. At least have a goal in mind and constantly ask the question “what if”.
If you are like me, ask these questions for each scene:
▪️write detail: don’t forget the senses, especially sound, sight, and smell.
▪️read other books and ask yourself why you like that book or what keeps you interested and try to learn from it.
▪️it’s okay to vary chapter length, it keeps things interesting.
▪️write hand gestures
▪️let your characters’ personalities speak through action.
▪️there doesn’t always have to be a moral
▪️delete “very” and be precise:
instead of “very good”say“excellent”.
▪️delay plot twist reveals, allow suspension to build
▪️avoid clichés
These are common clichés:
▪️show don’t tell
▪️captivate your readers from the start: pose a question:
Mary would never walk again. Why?
Peter’s heart was shattered.Why?
The day he came, my life drastically changed. Why? Who?
▪️use similes when appropriate
▪️don’t stress it, you’re doing great ☺️
Clarity:
She went all the way to the store by the way of a car in which she had just purchased. ✖️
Vs.
She went to the store in a car she had just purchased. ✔️
He very much loved the sounds that the cars made as they made their way passed his house at a very fast pace.✖️
Vs.
He loved the cars’ sounds as they quickly passed his house. ✔️
▪️Avoid run on sentences:
He bought a dog from the shelter because he wanted to give a homeless dog a nice new home and that made him feel like a good person. ✖️
Vs.
He bought a dog from the shelter because he wanted to give a homeless dog a nice new home. This made him feel like a good person.
▪️Cut out “was” when possible:
Courtney was smiling. ✖️
Vs.
Courtney smiled. ✔️
▪️Try using one sentace paragraphs:
She liked how the rain felt on her bare skin.
So, she chose to walk home, her feet crashing through puddles.
It took longer than it would have in a car.
But she didn’t regret it.
▪️Try shorter sentences:
Ann’s heart felt sad.
She didn’t know what had caused it.
All she knew was that she woke up one morning feeling sad.
▪️Be conside:
I like carrots. Carrots are better than broccoli.✖️
Vs.
I like carrots better than broccoli. ✔️
▪️Be Specific:
She ate a snack.✖️
Vs.
She ate peanut butter crackers. ✔️
She went out for entertainment.✖️
Vs.
She went to the theater.✔️
▪️Paint pictures:
The sun was yellow. The sky was blue.✖️
Vs.
The sky was a blanket of gold, fluttering through the pale blue. ✔️
▪️Express don’t impress:
Scintillating gold fulgrated across the sphere it was a quintessential evening.✖️
Vs.
Sparkling gold mixed through the navy sky. It was the perfect evening. ✔️
How to Have Confidence in Your Writing:
▪️post your story online for feedback
▪️read everyday
▪️write everyday
▪️put your story aside and then come back later (this helps you see it more clearly)
▪️read writing tips
▪️download Grammarly (there’s a free version)
▪️try not to edit as you go (this slows you down and makes you question everything. It can be quite frustrating. So, it’s better to wait until the end of the book to edit.)
▪️keep in mind that no one writes a perfect first draft - they are going to suck.
▪️actuallyfinish a story. (This builds confidence like crazy. You’ll feel so accomplished.)
Dialogue Tags:
▪️He explained. ✖️
▪️He advised. ✖️
▪️He warned. ✖️
▪️He confirmed. ✖️
▪️He accused. ✖️
▪️He babbled. ✖️
▪️He said.✔️
Although these tags aren’t always bad they can be overused and redundant to the reader.
Let me explain.
▪️“You stole my cookie, Linda!” Roger shouted.
(We already know Roger is accusing Linda and don’t need to say “Roger accused”.
It’s better to keep your tags basic.
▪️He said. ✔️
▪️She said. ✔️
▪️He asked. ✔️
▪️She asked. ✔️
▪️He yelled. ✔️
▪️She yelled. ✔️
But don’t overuse your tags.
“Hello,” Linda said.
“Hello,” Roger said.
“How are you?” Linda asked.
“I’m fine,” Roger replied.
Omit tags when readers can assume who is speaking.
Linda put her arm around Roger. “I love you.”
He smiled. “I love you, too.”
Use action instead of tags.
“I’ll miss you,” Roger cried. ✖️
Vs.
Hot tears swelled in Rogers eyes. “I’ll miss you.” ✔️
For someone who has typed upwards of 200,000 words for their novel, taken advanced English all their life, has a family of multigenerational English teachers, and has a formidable library in their room, I sure can’t spell worth a damn.
I spent a length of time I will not disclose cursing spell-check, more confident than I had any right to be that “paid” was actually spelled “payed.”
famous novels
#OTD in 2003 – James Plunkett, best known for his epic novel of Dublin, ‘Strumpet City’, dies at the age of 83.
#OTD in 2003 – James Plunkett, best known for his epic novel of Dublin, ‘Strumpet City’, dies at the age of 83.
“Two divine persons in one. A mother lamenting her children in bondage. A girl ravished by the Saxon, who weeps over her stringless harp. But her young champions keep watch in the mountains, awaiting the dawn of the bright sun of Freedom. They will gather around her with pikes and swords.” –James Plunkett ––Strumpet City
Plunkett grew up among the Dublin working class and they, along with the…