#writing dialogue

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˗ˏˋdialogue : severe injury/illnessˎˊ˗

change pronouns/tense as needed!

  • “holy shit… that’s a lot of blood…”
  • “that looks infected.”
  • “you’re burning up!”
  • “do you need to throw up?”
  • “are you okay? does anything hurt? who did this to you?!”
  • “it’s not that much blood.”
  • “it’s not infected! it just needs to be cleaned.”
  • “burning up? i’m freezing.”
  • “god, i feel like i’m gonna throw up.”
  • “i feel awful.”
  • name? are you awake…?”
  • “can you hear me?”
  • “fuck— you barely have a pulse…”
  • “try to stay awake. talk to me.”
  • “fuck it, i’m calling an ambulance.”
  • “yeah… i’m awake.”
  • “my ears are ringing.”
  • “is this hell?”
  • “i’m so tired…”
  • “i just— i just need some rest.”
  • “you have to stay awake.”
  • “keep your eyes open!”
  • “stay with me… please.”
  • “i need you…”
  • “i swear to fucking god— do not stop breathing!”
  • “i don’t know how long i can stay up…”
  • “i’m trying.”
  • “i’m sorry…”
  • “i love you.”
  • “can’t breathe…”

too angsty? no such thing ;)

if these seem rushed, i’m sorry. i woke up at 11:45 and only had 15 minutes to think of something. out came this!

˗ˏˋdialogue: k-12 lyricsˎˊ˗

change pronouns/tenses as needed!

warning: this album (and therefore these sentence starters) is dark and shouldn’t be listened to/read by those who are easily offended/sensitive.

songs that may trigger you include: show & tell, strawberry shortcake, orange juice, teacher’s pet & recess

wheels on the bus

  • “trying to ignore it, it’s fucking boring.”
  • “no one’s watching us…”
  • “don’t give a fuck.”


class fight

  • “I fell in love with him, but he wasn’t in my life.”
  • “mommy, why do i feel sad?”
  • “my one true love called me a monster.”


the principal

  • “it’s not just me, it’s everybody!”
  • “who thinks that you’re fucking ugly?”
  • “can’t you see that we’re all hurting?”

show & tell

  • “i’m just like you, you’re like me: imperfect and human, are we?”
  • “it’s really hard for me to say just how i feel.”
  • “why can’t you fucking hear me?!”


nurses office

  • “band-aids won’t heal it.”
  • “take me home.”
  • “i faked up a seizure and left then and there.”


drama club

  • “everyone is so soft, everyone is so sensitive.”
  • “do you even have a brain?”
  • “you’re faking all your pain.”


strawberry shortcake

  • “they say boys like girls with a tiny waist.”
  • “cause it’s how i look and not what i think.”
  • “instead of making me feel bad for the body i got just teach him to keep it in his pants and tell him to stop!”


lunchbox friends

  • “we can be friends if you wanna be, but only ‘til the clock hits three.”
  • “i want someone who understands.”
  • “wanna be my best friend then just me if i smoke a little weed, makes no fucking sense to me.”


orange juice

  • “you turn orange to orange juice.”
  • “your body is imperfectly perfect.”
  • “i wish i could tell you that you’re fine, so fine, but you would find that disconcerting.”


detention

  • “i’m not a bad guy.”
  • “pretending everything’s alright is detention.”
  • “fuck how i feel as long as i make money.”


teacher’s pet

  • “caught the teacher giving his eyes to a student.”
  • “i know i’m young but my mind is well beyond my years.”
  • “didn’t learn a damn thing, honey, from you… except how to lie and cheat.”


high school sweethearts

  • “if you can’t handle a heart like mine don’t waste your time with me.”
  • “if you cheat, you will die.”
  • “could you hold me through the night?”


recess

  • “i was too young to see the truth.”
  • “don’t let them fuck/hurt you.”
  • “i should be happy but i can’t get out my bed.”


notebook

  • “you’re selfish ‘cause you always think your ass is always right.”
  • “what’s the point in your “i love yous” when they don’t hold any weight?”
  • “time you start growing up.”


test me

  • “so stop complaining.”
  • “i’m not to be forgotten.”
  • “born to be desired.”


brain & heart

  • “i was illogical.”
  • “what fun is it to be so calculated? or be taken advantage of ‘cause your heart’s too trusting?”
  • “sometimes i think you’re all i need.”


numbers

  • “you’re making a big deal out of a little thing.”
  • “am i just a number? 'cause it seems like that’s your goal.”
  • “i need a reason why i’m looked at like a joke until i prove you wrong like i’ve done time and time before.”


glued

  • “you’re hard to let go.”
  • “i don’t wanna think about thе morbid parts of life no more.”
  • “i’m fucked up and clueless.”


field trip

  • “you know I’m not one to take orders from ya.”
  • “you’re not real, just like me.”
  • “but is your empathy actually authentic? is it?”


the bakery

  • “not my first pick, but i’ll do it.”
  • “they expect me to stay when i should go.”
  • “little mess up and she’s angry.”

sorry for all the album sentence starters lately. i’m clearing out my drafts and had a lot of em in there. this is the last one.

A bunch of different dialogue prompts #61

  1. “Why is no one dead?”
  2. “Riveting.”
  3. “Fascinating.”
  4. “I hate that I can’t tell whether you’re joking or not.”
  5. “Why are you doing that? This is not a thumbs-up situation.”
  6. “You better watch your back!”
  7. “This is feminism, baby.” “It’s really not…”
  8. “Who still asks for permission?”
  9. “Lighten up, it’s tradition!”
  10. “You hungry?” “Famished.”

A bunch of different dialogue prompts #60

  1. “I will advise you to reconsider.”
  2. “He’s up to no good.” “How do you know?” “He’s thinking, what more proof do you need?”
  3. “I know a traitor when I see one.”
  4. “I’ll take care of you.” “Yeah, right.”
  5. “Want some advice?” “From who?” “Me, obviously-” “NO!”
  6. “You never go against the family, kid.” “Why are you talking like that?”
  7. “He has the ugliest soul of any human being I’ve ever met.”
  8. “Moving swiftly on,-”
  9. “Is it supposed to glow like that?”
  10. “That was corny.” “What is wrong with you?”

A bunch of different dialogue prompts #57

  1. “Be forewarned: I’m about to become ten times more insufferable.”
  2. “Since when do you knit?” “Since when did I give you permission to be all up in my business? Exactly. So shut up.”
  3. “Get in here, right now!”
  4. “And I’ve been clear on that since the beginning.”
  5. “Give me the keys!”
  6. “There’s no way, there’s just no way.”
  7. “Since when?”
  8. “Is this what love is supposed to feel like?”
  9. “I’m not going to let how I look, dictate the way I live my life.”
  10. “I feel like I’m gonna throw up.” “It’s cuz you’re always on that phone!”

Prompt #42


“You left everything behind and for what ? You had such a good life, you had everything everyone would dream of !”


The tension rose in the air and person B looked back with an expression of distrust, distress, and pure anger. With gritted teeth they take a jagged breath before clenching their fists.


“Well maybe it wasn’t as perfect as you thought it was ! Maybe it was hell on earth for MEandI had to escape !”


The sudden change in tone throws person A off guard as they find themselves flinching to the new, and very much aggressive tone. Their face temporarily softening before hiding away behind a thin curtain of false courage, ready to die on the hill they didn’t even stand for.

Prompt #40


“And even through it all, all the hardships, all the pain - you’re right back where you started”


“What ? — what the hell are you talking about ?!”


“Look around [name] ! No one is here, everyone is gone - they’re safe..but you’re not, just as it was before”


“You don’t know what you’re talking about”


“But I do, the sad little train wreck, love must not be affordable for you - you spend it all for others but no one gives you a cent. And now they just - poof - gone”

Prompt #39


“You know, there’s a difference between you and I. I don’t look back and regret my mistakes, I don’t think about what could’ve been - if I could change it I’d do worse !”


“Why do you make yourself out to be so bad ? I can help you ! Let me help you !”


“No one fucking helped me when I needed it the most ! To all you be damned and I reign supreme for I make my own fucking legacy known to this god forsaken earth !”

Prompt #17


“Don’t do that..”


“Do what ?”


“Don’t play with my feelings and act like you care about me ! I..I don’t want to fucking get hurt again !”


“..[villain], but everything I said was true, I mean every good thing I say about you - I want to prove it in anyway I can”

Prompt #15


“It’s amusing how affectionate you’re being,”


“Ok mr/ms big words, just cuddle me back already”


“Aren’t you pouty today, love”


“I wanna cuddle and be kissed all over my face of course I’m pouty”


“As you wish my dear,”

Prompt #14


“Come on now, is it so hard to see even your own team underestimates how much you’re carrying them through success !”


“They’re…I..”


“You can’t even come up with a proper excuse anymore ! You defended them left and right, they went up in the ranks because of youthey haven’t even searched for you ! They don’t care about you, but I,,I do - I see how strong you are, how creatively complex you are”


“You don’t need to falsely flatter me”


“Oh but it’s true, I’ve seen how you operate, they never listen to your ideas until they need it the most, because their ideas are complete shit - yours are thought out, you’re so smart”


“You..you can stop whenever you want”


“But I can see how much you enjoy it, you don’t get praised as much as you should. You’re flustered and everything, all shy and adorable”


“Why did you even do this ? We made this deal yes,, and you’re right - but why ?”


“Because believe it or not, once upon a time I had a team too - they were just as shitty as the one you’re in or should I say were in, they’ll never change - just as much as mine never did”


“And you want me to still join you ?”


“Of course I do, and all my promises, all the good things that are yet to be seen, they will be now - this time we’ll be unstoppable and you’ll actually be appreciated like you should”


“….”


“So how about it, [hero] ?”


“Of course, it’s a deal”


“That’s what I like to here, teammate”

Prompt #11


“You look like you have a purpose, one that you may not like - but I know you will eventually, [pet name]”


“What the..what the hell do you mean purpose ?”


“You’re purpose is to be mine, and mine to be yours, we’re destined to be together, [name], oh the stars were aligned for the two of us to finally be together — !”


“Wh-what ?..”


“Don’t worry, [pet name], you’ll understand as much as I soon enough, but I don’t plan on letting you go, my precious soulmate”

Prompt #7


“If I had to choose between my own life and protecting yours, I’m sure you’d know what I’d choose”


“What the fuck do you me-“


“I mean you’re precious to me, [hero], despite how much you supposedly say you hate me - I really care about you,”


“Don’t tell me you’re getting soft on me, [nickname for villain]”


“No,, never”


“You’re blushing and everything !”

Prompt #3


“Do you ever wonder what happens when one dies ?”


“No, I just know there’s something good one”


“So sure of yourself, then why don’t you go there ? I’ll be the one to help you get there - free of charge,”

Prompt#2


“We must remind them who they belong to”


“You have the whole world in your hands, the power to do ANYTHING a and you wish to make them suffer ?!”


“How else will they learn ?”


“This is madness !”


“Then so be it,”

Prompt#1


“You know they’ll only trust you for so long,”


“And ? They don’t know anything right now, it’s not like they’ll-”


“That’s not the point, [name], we can’t keep doing this forever, someone will find us and one of if not both of us will be hurt — or even forced to hurt the other”


“I know..but we can at least act like it’ll last forever, even if it won’t - I don’t want to leave you, I said I wouldn’t — so — so..I’m not,”

Whump Dialogue

(Sarcastic/annoyed caretaker)

  • “How many fingers?… Yes I’m serious! Shut up and answer the question!”
  • “If even half of that blood is yours you need to sit down right now.”
  • “Is it too much to ask for you to not get stabbed for five minutes!?”
  • “Wow those bloodstained clothes really bring out your eyes… Of course I’m being sarcastic! Get over here and let me stitch you up!”
  • “C’mon, you gotta work with me here. I’m not dragging your unconscious ass back by myself”
  • “Y’know, I don’t really blame them. Your face is very punchable… especially when you glare at me like that..”
  • “I may not be a doctor, but I’m pretty sure blood belongs on the inside.”
  • “Okay, normally I’d laugh, but this is just getting ridiculous. Sit down before you pass out.”
  • “Ah yes, how heroic of you to get shot in the side and puke all over my shoes. Next time could you just pull me out of the way like a normal person instead of jumping in front of the bullet?”
lady-feral: justsycrets: So I just started my short story writing class! These are dialogue tips ref

lady-feral:

justsycrets:

So I just started my short story writing class! These are dialogue tips

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